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Midnight View
Across the yard through midnight dew
comes soft the silhouette of you,
and by my bedroom lamp you see
the dimly glowing shape of me,
translucent in my silky lace.
You pause a glance, then push the pace,
up ivy-covered trellis climb
in moonlight green, as if each vine
were somehow tethered to our souls
where melding makes the perfect whole.
The latch unhinged; you crawl inside.
We gently wrestle on the floor.
You kiss me hard; your fingers glide
where playful boys have touched before,
But you, my sweet, a kitten's breath,
have dared to breathe my heart anew.
My hesitation put to death,
I sink beneath the starlight hue
of passion's unexpected crush.
You tease.
I arch.
You taste.
I gush.
A thousand stenciled sparkles fly
like lightning searing up each thigh.
Tantalizing talons tear
away my tearful underwear.
And when I fall back to myself,
we saunter sideways into bed,
my legs across your shoulder's shelf,
so snug, embrace your lovely head.
You squeeze my cheeks, my petals spread
in blissful springtime velvet bloom.
The pink aroma that I've shed
distills to nectar you consume.
My parents, long since gone to sleep,
are unaware your probing tongue
has pierced their daughter's core so deep
to make her secret waters run.
A roaring river floods the sheets.
We'll drown before we see the sun,
before we share a morning's kiss.
But in the dark, we drench ourselves
in utter bliss,
the sea's abyss,
a foamy froth we can't resist.
And miles from where in bed we lie
is surf
is sand
is open sky;
a beach that we can walk upon,
a place where we can wake at dawn.
Published 26th Apr 2024
Author's Note
I'm waiting for you in my room...
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26th Apr 2024 6:18pm
I've never seen writing like this before. Every word perfect, unique. Are you an author of books?
Great writing.
Great writing.
26th Apr 2024 11:01pm
26th Apr 2024 11:03pm
26th Apr 2024 6:48pm
An amazing piece of poetry. You definitely captivate the reader and their imagination. Perfect!
26th Apr 2024 11:03pm
26th Apr 2024 8:24pm
New Erotic poetry coming soon
DRINKS ON ME
BY TROME
COMING SOON
???
WHISY. WASHY
❤️😍😎💋😜👀
DRINKS ON ME
BY TROME
COMING SOON
???
WHISY. WASHY
❤️😍😎💋😜👀
26th Apr 2024 11:04pm
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4th May 2024 3:32pm
4th May 2024 3:42pm
Thank you, Detective! I'm so happy you dropped by to check this. Is that a pistol in your pocket?
Meg
Meg
4th May 2024 9:11pm
8th May 2024 2:59am
It was certainly difficult to figure out where to start reading DK. (and unfortunately I have not had much reading time lately)
But you definitely pulled me into this immersive rendezvous.
Such a gorgeous representation of feminine sexual energy coming together, exploring...
I can taste your words so deeply to the very end... Feeling the need to push my tongue deeper...
To swirl it around the most sensitive places in a way no boy ever could.
When the sensation becomes unbearable and you desperately try to push me away, I will delve even deeper...
Your body shaking for me, convulsing... releasing again and again,.
I will eagerly take in every last drop of your essence to the milky end.
And when I allow you to collapse, I know my final reward will be that angelic smile.
But you definitely pulled me into this immersive rendezvous.
Such a gorgeous representation of feminine sexual energy coming together, exploring...
I can taste your words so deeply to the very end... Feeling the need to push my tongue deeper...
To swirl it around the most sensitive places in a way no boy ever could.
When the sensation becomes unbearable and you desperately try to push me away, I will delve even deeper...
Your body shaking for me, convulsing... releasing again and again,.
I will eagerly take in every last drop of your essence to the milky end.
And when I allow you to collapse, I know my final reward will be that angelic smile.
8th May 2024 3:54am
Well, that's the most gorgeous, panty drenching critique I've ever received about anything I've ever posted - so thank you for that while I go change! Just WOW! Breathless! SMILE! Thank you!
PUUUURRRRR
PUUUURRRRR
24th May 2024 12:12pm
Wow.! I got a big big like of this one. Tell me where that trellis is, so I can watch!
25th May 2024 8:53pm
