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No Sin Too Far
She’s a revolution
One woman
Wrecking crew
Breaks convention
No sin too far
Don’t look
Or get caught
Her storm
Will tear down
All your safe barriers
Every mark
On your skin
Is with her heels
Walking
All over you
She will
Challenge those desires
Rip your soul
For her own
Wanton pleasures
Leave you
Panting on the bed
For more
Even though
She’s taken all you got
One woman
Wrecking crew
Breaks convention
No sin too far
Don’t look
Or get caught
Her storm
Will tear down
All your safe barriers
Every mark
On your skin
Is with her heels
Walking
All over you
She will
Challenge those desires
Rip your soul
For her own
Wanton pleasures
Leave you
Panting on the bed
For more
Even though
She’s taken all you got
Published 26th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Wish she would......
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26th Apr 2024 1:27am
26th Apr 2024 1:40am
hello dearest poet this sounds like a black widow a woman with an agenda there is loyalty on all sides with me proven tried and true I hope the the trap you lay for her here works or you may fall in it.
26th Apr 2024 2:02am
no good with traps
getting caught in them
I know be careful what you wish for
getting caught in them
I know be careful what you wish for
26th Apr 2024 2:05am
26th Apr 2024 2:08am
26th Apr 2024 3:52pm
I apologize dearest poet sometimes its not clear who your enemy really is... when you have been pitted against the ones you love...I can see beauty in the darkest of places but right now I am facing odds that are daunting doing the best I can beaten but not out while they plan my final orchestra...
26th Apr 2024 4:54pm
let's hope your final orchestra is quite a few yrs yet
and a virtual hug to give you a little strength for the fight
and a virtual hug to give you a little strength for the fight
26th Apr 2024 3:22am
Hey AP, I love how fatalistic you get, and the surrender to it. This has a cool execution, and I like the dark nature of the subject.
Kickass my friend.
Kickass my friend.
26th Apr 2024 1:25pm
26th Apr 2024 1:54pm
26th Apr 2024 2:02pm
was I thinking of you
maybe
but then again....
I'm not usually that up front
maybe
but then again....
I'm not usually that up front
26th Apr 2024 2:05pm
26th Apr 2024 2:08pm
