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Surrender
Crazy
For her love
Crazy
For her body
Trouble
With my breathing
Trouble
With my control
Would surrender
If I could
Would surrender
If she wanted me to
For her love
Crazy
For her body
Trouble
With my breathing
Trouble
With my control
Would surrender
If I could
Would surrender
If she wanted me to
Published 25th Apr 2024
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25th Apr 2024 9:29pm
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25th Apr 2024 9:58pm
I came here for you I woke up and realized them... you love them and I do too... we will stand back to back should to shoulder a brotherhood of men pitted against each other to feed his greed there will be no peace and the dark wishes for no false pardon brothers prepare your minds this is war I will not lie down my sword... I came here for war realizing he's lying and punking me I realize he is torturing our children peace the grand illusion.
25th Apr 2024 10:08pm
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
25th Apr 2024 11:56pm
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26th Apr 2024 2:16am
It all sounds rather hypothetical in the style that you have written it, sir! I like it though. Has that underdog feel about it. ;-)
26th Apr 2024 2:19am
