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Kiss
You kissed the place
of my child’s belonging.
I kissed the tool you'd
use in planting.
Then I placed you there.
of my child’s belonging.
I kissed the tool you'd
use in planting.
Then I placed you there.
Published 25th Apr 2024
| Edited 26th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Short thought about the August 5 affair that resulted in anything but casual results.
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25th Apr 2024 5:25pm
lets hope you don't get ordered a c section that's what I'm voting for and bad stretchmarks in you last month that would be fair for your cheating diary. if you're out for revenge remember it might blow up in your face and like it or not Vengeance is his alone...
26th Apr 2024 3:59am
I'm not sure how you're reading "revenge" into this little poem. But, thanks so much for your kind wishes.
25th Apr 2024 5:28pm
25th Apr 2024 5:32pm
Rhyming comment
A tender write
of "act of flight"..
However, I wish well for a safe birth of what is coming to feel like the latest DUP baby. Don't worry too much about scars, they will be marks of your experience in the future. An English opera singer Leslie Garratt cheerfully admits from her own childbirth experience having a C-section scar "like a smile"!
A tender write
of "act of flight"..
However, I wish well for a safe birth of what is coming to feel like the latest DUP baby. Don't worry too much about scars, they will be marks of your experience in the future. An English opera singer Leslie Garratt cheerfully admits from her own childbirth experience having a C-section scar "like a smile"!
25th Apr 2024 5:58pm
I find it a bit weird when I think of it. His mouth almost close enough to whisper/speak in the baby's ear. To sing to it, to assure it. All the while enjoying mama.
27th Apr 2024 3:52am
"Affair" catches my attention, girl. LOL
Anyway, sounds like you should be almost there if it was August.
I like the brevity of your piece. There's a serenity in the way you describe how that happened.
Anyway, sounds like you should be almost there if it was August.
I like the brevity of your piece. There's a serenity in the way you describe how that happened.
