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Fia
Fia speaks,
and I reply.
We see each other eye to eye.
My body fits her like a dress.
She flicks her tongue, and I confess.
She takes me where I should not go.
She tells me things she cannot know.
She pets my muff until I purr.
She's into me. I'm into her.
Fia tastes
like Creme Brulé.
We fuck all night. We kiss all day.
Her Maple lips are sticky sweet.
She pulls my leash and makes me eat.
She ties my wrists above my head.
She rarely lets me out of bed.
I am her crass Caucasian slave.
She whips my ass so I behave,
then licks the wounds her straps apply.
She is my world, I can't deny.
Fia spends
the afternoon
fisting me inside her room,
twisting nipples, slapping clit.
Her love for me will never quit.
And I would gladly die beneath
the pink encasement of her sheath,
sucking cunt till I convulse...
breathless wench without a pulse.
For Fia knows a cat survives,
and every kitten has nine lives.
and I reply.
We see each other eye to eye.
My body fits her like a dress.
She flicks her tongue, and I confess.
She takes me where I should not go.
She tells me things she cannot know.
She pets my muff until I purr.
She's into me. I'm into her.
Fia tastes
like Creme Brulé.
We fuck all night. We kiss all day.
Her Maple lips are sticky sweet.
She pulls my leash and makes me eat.
She ties my wrists above my head.
She rarely lets me out of bed.
I am her crass Caucasian slave.
She whips my ass so I behave,
then licks the wounds her straps apply.
She is my world, I can't deny.
Fia spends
the afternoon
fisting me inside her room,
twisting nipples, slapping clit.
Her love for me will never quit.
And I would gladly die beneath
the pink encasement of her sheath,
sucking cunt till I convulse...
breathless wench without a pulse.
For Fia knows a cat survives,
and every kitten has nine lives.
Author's Note
Submitting to Fia
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 5:30am
She told me you were planning a surprise…she’s going turn even redder than her hair…. I’m not going to tell you this is an amazing poem… you already know you are.
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Re: Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 5:38am
You are up way beyond your bedtime, sir. I'm talking to you, Doctor PhD. You shouldn't be flirting with some naughty Mississippi nurse.
But since you're awake...
But since you're awake...
Re: Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 5:44am
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25th Apr 2024 5:51am
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Yes I’m sure you will have the revokers and the people on this site eating from the palm of your hands as well as from other places as a PhD I’m not allowed to mention
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Re: Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 6:07am
Oh, c'mon... live a little and mention them. It's not like you're a priest. Well, I'll keep your secret.
Speaking of which, when should I come for my next confession?
Speaking of which, when should I come for my next confession?
Re: Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 6:16am
I’m getting the hell out of here before Fia wakes up and finds us confessing all over the place…she'll probably be furious we didn’t invite her for a threesome confession… enjoy yourself… oh god… I gave her the idea… may god forgive me for my sin -priest Sam… and I don’t have secrets… everyone knows I don’t have secrets … don’t you dare…!!
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Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 5:49am
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you (and FIA) well.
Did you use automatic writing? Or as it’s sometime called writing in a stream of consciousness?
I like it a lot.
Like the author’s note too. In case I didn’t understand.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you (and FIA) well.
Did you use automatic writing? Or as it’s sometime called writing in a stream of consciousness?
I like it a lot.
Like the author’s note too. In case I didn’t understand.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 5:54am
Hello Gus! I have no idea what you are talking about. Writing in a stream of consciousness? I'm all out of LSD over here.
Thanks so much for telling me what you think! So awesome.
Maybe you can fill me in.
Thanks so much for telling me what you think! So awesome.
Maybe you can fill me in.
Re: Re. Fia
25th Apr 2024 6:51am
Oh dear God no! I am convinced that anything I can do under the influence of something, I can do better on my own.
I’m sorry if I gave you the idea that any dope would be involved.
I come from Amsterdam, but am not in favour of using lsd for instance. I even didn’t drink from my 20th till my 40 year.
Automatic writing (as it is called here) is sitting down good and concentrated and you start by putting your pen to paper and let the words flow as they come.
The starting point (prompt if you will) can be a photo, a couple of words or something somebody said. Really anything that gets you started.
Every day I am at home, I write a song. Dutch mostly. And all of the words are written with automatic writing.
Compare it to a runner’s high. Of course this writing generates happy hormones, and you can train your brain to be receptive to them if you write daily at more or less the same time. I would really love it if you would give it a try.
So, in short, I was wondering if this lovely piece of work was song smith-like written word by word and polished till is shines or written in a situation where you gave away most of the control and wrote it as it came.
This way of working is wonderful. You lose your shyness towards lesser work knowing that you write a completely new one tomorrow.
I do hope I make sense since English is not the language my mum taught me.
Needless to say I love your writes a lot.
And I hope you are OK knowing that I only meant it as real interest and a compliment for very powerful writing.
Kind regards, Gus
I’m sorry if I gave you the idea that any dope would be involved.
I come from Amsterdam, but am not in favour of using lsd for instance. I even didn’t drink from my 20th till my 40 year.
Automatic writing (as it is called here) is sitting down good and concentrated and you start by putting your pen to paper and let the words flow as they come.
The starting point (prompt if you will) can be a photo, a couple of words or something somebody said. Really anything that gets you started.
Every day I am at home, I write a song. Dutch mostly. And all of the words are written with automatic writing.
Compare it to a runner’s high. Of course this writing generates happy hormones, and you can train your brain to be receptive to them if you write daily at more or less the same time. I would really love it if you would give it a try.
So, in short, I was wondering if this lovely piece of work was song smith-like written word by word and polished till is shines or written in a situation where you gave away most of the control and wrote it as it came.
This way of working is wonderful. You lose your shyness towards lesser work knowing that you write a completely new one tomorrow.
I do hope I make sense since English is not the language my mum taught me.
Needless to say I love your writes a lot.
And I hope you are OK knowing that I only meant it as real interest and a compliment for very powerful writing.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Fia
26th Apr 2024 1:34am
Wow, that's interesting, Gus. There are times when I write that way, but to be quite honest... I'm a busy girl. The way that I write is to jot down ideas on napkins and receipts, then put something together when I have a moment in the corner.
This poem, on the other hand, started with a purpose...
Meg
xoxoxo
This poem, on the other hand, started with a purpose...
Meg
xoxoxo
Re. Fia
Kitten... That was perfectly penned. Friday night I'll be knocking at you door. Wear the usual. Nothing.
Love this
Oh Sam. I'm coming for you
Fia 🔥 🔥 💯
Love this
Oh Sam. I'm coming for you
Fia 🔥 🔥 💯
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Re: Re. Fia
26th Apr 2024 1:32am
Door's open. Just come in. Bedroom's upstairs to the left.
Glad you liked it!
Meg
xoxoxo
Glad you liked it!
Meg
xoxoxo
Re. Fia
4th May 2024 3:24pm
Brilliant! The message is clear. You want Fia badly. Can't get more erotic then this. Nicely executed.
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