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And there he was…
Standing in front of me
While my weariness rested on his chest
My forehead
Brushing the soft cotton of his shirt
My words silent
As my tears smiled
I looked up
Faintly familiar
His gentle eyes reassuring
As his arms circled my waist
Life was perfect
Then the sound of my phone
Woke me up
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Re. And there he was…
24th Apr 2024 8:02pm
Don't you hate it when we find its all been a dream and life isn't that pleasurable or secure. :(
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24th Apr 2024 8:05pm
I was having the most lovely dream.
And then my friend woke me up. He just got home, had my bananas.
I love bananas, but I prefer THIS ;)
And then my friend woke me up. He just got home, had my bananas.
I love bananas, but I prefer THIS ;)
Re. And there he was…
24th Apr 2024 8:18pm
Very clever write! Love those kind of dreams in which I wake up feeling like a queen.
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24th Apr 2024 8:18pm
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24th Apr 2024 8:24pm
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24th Apr 2024 8:24pm
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24th Apr 2024 8:25pm
I’ll never know…
But I did close my eyes real tight and beg for him to come back.
It didn’t work :(
But I did close my eyes real tight and beg for him to come back.
It didn’t work :(
Re. And there he was…
24th Apr 2024 9:04pm
Now this is what I call poetry… with a wake up call. You always seem to amaze me
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Re. And there he was…
24th Apr 2024 9:05pm
Dreams can make everything seem perfect can't they? Been going back and forth with some draining ones lately, but we have to work our way through them. Tight piece Lady
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24th Apr 2024 9:07pm
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Re. And there he was…
24th Apr 2024 10:07pm
I was buying into your hot love scene, entering a state of high anticipation when your phone shattered my allusions. Yeah WTF? How dare you tease me like that....nice write, but next time, take the phone off the hook...Jim
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Re. And there he was…
25th Apr 2024 2:37am
Re. And there he was…
25th Apr 2024 2:52am
That sounds like such a nice dream. I think my favorite part about dreams like these is the after, when you’re still in that fuzzy part of waking up and you feel so warm and happy. Or just thinking of the dream throughout the day and feeling so *warm*. Sorry for my babbling, I’m a bit of a hopeless romantic☺️
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25th Apr 2024 2:55am
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