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Quantum
all it took for me to fall in love
was one chance, miraculous moment,
coinciding quite nicely with
a random rainy Tuesday afternoon;
the rundown yet quaint bookstore
provided the perfect intersection
between your day and mine;
I never believed in divine timing
until our eyes boldly introduced us,
spilling all our best-kept secrets
across the gardening aisle -
it was the most holy thing I’ve felt;
I still ponder the magnitude
of that small moment, a tiny seed
containing finely-detailed blueprint,
the structure of time and space
Published 18th Apr 2024
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18th Apr 2024 1:18am
18th Apr 2024 1:28am
18th Apr 2024 2:03am
This is just the type of write that I needed to read tonight. It's perfect ! And relatable to many probably. "Words" have snared many of us in some way or another! Words are like our drawbridge...
23rd Apr 2024 1:11pm
18th Apr 2024 3:23am
Time and space are tricky things… you don’t know when and where …. By the time you do you’re already sucked into a black hole
23rd Apr 2024 1:11pm
30th Apr 2024 2:52pm
Congratulations on completing your FIFTH NAPO, Luna! Despite your personal struggle, you pushed on and succeeded with some of your best work!
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22nd Jun 2024 6:28pm
This at it's core it not only serendipitous but it also feels magical for all it's purpose.
Amazing work
Amazing work
22nd Jun 2024 7:05pm
