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The in between
The darkness is closing in
I hear it banging on the walls
Of my mind, my soul and everything within
Listening to the sound of my breath as it stalls
Everything comes rushing in at a pace thats hard to bear
Reaching for a hand but no one is there
Can anyone see me or do they just not care
Thinking of happy times I get lost in a stare
In between worlds I refuse to let go
Grasping at ghosts as my hand slips through
How could I ever possibly not know
From the beginning it was only you
The whole time its been you
I hear it banging on the walls
Of my mind, my soul and everything within
Listening to the sound of my breath as it stalls
Everything comes rushing in at a pace thats hard to bear
Reaching for a hand but no one is there
Can anyone see me or do they just not care
Thinking of happy times I get lost in a stare
In between worlds I refuse to let go
Grasping at ghosts as my hand slips through
How could I ever possibly not know
From the beginning it was only you
The whole time its been you
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Re. The in between
17th Apr 2024 3:13pm
Ahh.. such raw words show the true character of a soul trying to find a way back home, in addition, the displayed emotions do seem to resonate with me.
Enjoy the remainder of your day in all that you may do as well.
Love and Hugs, always.
SKC🤎
Enjoy the remainder of your day in all that you may do as well.
Love and Hugs, always.
SKC🤎
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17th Apr 2024 3:18pm
Thank you for reading. I admit I feel like I am wandering aimlessly through life. Searching and seeking but always coming up short. Self sabotage and fear of abandonment always lead down a road to nowhere.
I do hope you have a wonderful day.
I do hope you have a wonderful day.
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17th Apr 2024 3:45pm
I am here if you ever need a soft shoulder to lean upon, my love and you are humbly welcome.
Now, smile for yourself, and if you can muster the strength, then for the world.
Now, smile for yourself, and if you can muster the strength, then for the world.
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Re: Re. The in between
17th Apr 2024 3:50pm
Thank you. Your offer means more than you know. Im a sit and suffer alone kinda person but your kindness to a stranger is heartwarming.
Re: Re. The in between
17th Apr 2024 3:53pm
It's universal, my love and it's yours if ever needed, my oath to you, always.
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Re. The in between
18th Apr 2024 7:39am
Sorrow and sadness is an EOE. It doesn't discriminate, yet theyll pick and chose the unlucky ones. <3
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18th Apr 2024 7:51am
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18th Apr 2024 7:55am
Re. The in between
18th Apr 2024 7:53am
maybe you lost sight of who you are in this brainwashing society and she did too...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjOtKC_GZ9o
I'm awake and listening./.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjOtKC_GZ9o
I'm awake and listening./.
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Re: Re. The in between
18th Apr 2024 7:56am
maybe you lost sight of who you are in this brainwashing society and she did too...
I 100% agree with this. love me some Crims words <3
I 100% agree with this. love me some Crims words <3
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18th Apr 2024 7:57am
I def lost sight but if there was any brainwashing going on for my part it was self induced and based on self loathing.
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18th Apr 2024 8:01am
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j-qQ_brIsfY there is a message here blah blah play the game...I get it...
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18th Apr 2024 8:02am
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21st Apr 2024 6:46am
Never heard this before or knew it existed but goddamn did i enjoy that! Thank you for the link and the share. Always happy to be put up on new music.
Re. The in between
18th Apr 2024 8:09am
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_W7wqQwa-TU&list=RDGMEMJQXQAmqrnmK1SEjY_rKBGA&start_radio=1&rv=aUJuwNxNUWQ don't fall asleep and forget me note to self and to you.
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21st Apr 2024 6:48am
I dont think I will forget you. I dont really know you yet but you are pretty unique from what I have read of your writings, the comments you've made to me and that new music you gave me.