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Re. Friends
16th Apr 2024 12:50pm
That was great. Sadness is usually disguised in the form of anger.
Your last line says it all.
Really nice work with this one!
Your last line says it all.
Really nice work with this one!
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16th Apr 2024 12:51pm
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Re. Friends
16th Apr 2024 7:24pm
This is almost psychological and therapeutic. You do well with capturing the transitions of change in emotion and logic that need to happen for someone that's dissocial. Really, relationships and community are the most important areas of life. If you isolate yourself, you will definitely feel emotionally imbalanced. It's all about communication. Anyway, again, good job overall. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Re. Friends
16th Apr 2024 7:25pm
It's always about connecting with someone you care for & trust. Always..Thank you Connotation for the kind words and feedback.
Re: Re. Friends
16th Apr 2024 7:27pm
You're quite welcome. I thought it was an interesting poem. Evoked a bit of self-reflection, heh.
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17th Apr 2024 10:02am
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Re: Re. Friends
17th Apr 2024 10:07am
Thank you for enjoying this piece and choosing it on your reading list.