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real chemistry...
there is a hopeless
distance between us
we don't belong to each other
we were never meant for each other
But
we share our horny thoughts
passionately with each other
your words clings to my body
whisper in my ears
they comfort me
and sometimes bite me
when we lie in each other's arms
for whole night
then it feels like
I'm wearing my favorite outfit
and as soon as morning comes
you quietly slip out of my sheets
and disappear into the morning haze
to come back to me
to command my soul
to corrupt my innocence
in your darkness
n n n
to dominate my body...
distance between us
we don't belong to each other
we were never meant for each other
But
we share our horny thoughts
passionately with each other
your words clings to my body
whisper in my ears
they comfort me
and sometimes bite me
when we lie in each other's arms
for whole night
then it feels like
I'm wearing my favorite outfit
and as soon as morning comes
you quietly slip out of my sheets
and disappear into the morning haze
to come back to me
to command my soul
to corrupt my innocence
in your darkness
n n n
to dominate my body...
Author's Note
this is for you dear artist...
a petal of flower...
thanks you for always being here... n for your constant support...XX
a petal of flower...
thanks you for always being here... n for your constant support...XX
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Re. real chemistry...
15th Apr 2024 2:10pm
This is an exquisite piece of writing dimpy.
You know the landscape well.
I've watched you develop and bloom into a beautiful writer of passion and desire.
I know that landscape as well.
I know you struggled with acceptance here on DUP. It was my honor to help you along on that jagged path. There's no reason why anyone should have given you a hard time for writing steamy erotica. Many of us write it. You happen to write it very well.
Yes, we hail from different lands.
Much distance. Innocence corrupted.
As I see it though, all is fair in the writing of poetry and romance and everything in between. You stir me dimpy.
Your avatar burns in my psyche.
I lust ...
You did that to me, I don't apologize for capturing you as you captured me.
Your write is phenomenally dripping with heat. I am overwhelmed.
Thank you for your aura and grace ...
With,
❤
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You know the landscape well.
I've watched you develop and bloom into a beautiful writer of passion and desire.
I know that landscape as well.
I know you struggled with acceptance here on DUP. It was my honor to help you along on that jagged path. There's no reason why anyone should have given you a hard time for writing steamy erotica. Many of us write it. You happen to write it very well.
Yes, we hail from different lands.
Much distance. Innocence corrupted.
As I see it though, all is fair in the writing of poetry and romance and everything in between. You stir me dimpy.
Your avatar burns in my psyche.
I lust ...
You did that to me, I don't apologize for capturing you as you captured me.
Your write is phenomenally dripping with heat. I am overwhelmed.
Thank you for your aura and grace ...
With,
❤
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. real chemistry...
15th Apr 2024 2:22pm
I was scared somewhere.. but m glad that you liked.. :) still sorry if my any word caused you trouble.. Well thank you for RL entry...
Re: Re. real chemistry...
15th Apr 2024 2:56pm
No trouble dimpy
Gave me a BIG SMILE
Thanks again
Great write and fun picture !
X
Gave me a BIG SMILE
Thanks again
Great write and fun picture !
X
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Re: Re. real chemistry...
15th Apr 2024 3:48pm
Awww
I'm relaxed now :)
I'm a fan of that BIG SMILE 🤠
Well the picture shows a peaceful and comfortable bond of two people... n I felt this the perfect image for this stuff...
I'm relaxed now :)
I'm a fan of that BIG SMILE 🤠
Well the picture shows a peaceful and comfortable bond of two people... n I felt this the perfect image for this stuff...
Re. real chemistry...
15th Apr 2024 2:50pm
You are phenomenal, dimpy.
Never worry about what you write or how you write it. Your words sizzle with desire and everything that is you.
Keep shining.
I’ve enjoyed watching your relationship with PS develop. The bond you share is beautiful.
Never worry about what you write or how you write it. Your words sizzle with desire and everything that is you.
Keep shining.
I’ve enjoyed watching your relationship with PS develop. The bond you share is beautiful.
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15th Apr 2024 3:51pm
Yes...he is the only one who appreciated me the most...nd I will always try will never disappoint him... I will always try to write the best "in my own way"... :) thank you marry for your comment and RL entry...
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15th Apr 2024 5:19pm
Re. real chemistry...
15th Apr 2024 4:57pm
I love chemistry ... it was my favorite subject in school... now this chemistry is way way better
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15th Apr 2024 5:14pm
Re. real chemistry...
Yes, there can be a chemistry in long distance relating between poets, that may spark the hottest inner feelings. There have been a few female poets from around the world (mostly non-white, but, hey, I have no colour bar) with whom I have formed heart warming friendships and share personal news etc.
Like other commenters I agree with the way you have blossomed on this site. I certainly count you among my company, it is cheering to see your avatar as I know I am bound to be in for some interesting reading. You certainly get a BIG SMILE from me too.
About the picture, the cats' colour contrast could also symbolise amity can be colour blind skin-wise too. Also, BTW in England black cats are traditionally a sign of GOOD luck.
Like other commenters I agree with the way you have blossomed on this site. I certainly count you among my company, it is cheering to see your avatar as I know I am bound to be in for some interesting reading. You certainly get a BIG SMILE from me too.
About the picture, the cats' colour contrast could also symbolise amity can be colour blind skin-wise too. Also, BTW in England black cats are traditionally a sign of GOOD luck.
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16th Apr 2024 3:07am
I love that you are in touch with non white people... and yes, the world is created by the God, everything he created is awesome...right?? So kindness should be shown to every living being, whether it is white or black.. N yaaa thanks a lot for your warm words about me...
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16th Apr 2024 6:07am
I have a flexible ability to see beauty that is not confined by one skin colour, hair colour, dress size or age decade, and I am sure God sees beauty in all his human creation better than many people.
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16th Apr 2024 7:00am
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2024 1:20am
Comfort with a bite...that's a potent combination!
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16th Apr 2024 3:35am
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16th Apr 2024 3:06am
Your words travel effortlessly halfway around the world for our joy and satisfaction!
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