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The Bones
you, are a zero
masked as hero
you crushed me
with your ways
the gaslighting
and mind fucks
your narcissistic
abusive behavior
my killer my lover
way too big ego
with fake traits
you ruined me
reduced me to
an empty frame
yet i was able to
escape your play
for i am the bones
you could not break
masked as hero
you crushed me
with your ways
the gaslighting
and mind fucks
your narcissistic
abusive behavior
my killer my lover
way too big ego
with fake traits
you ruined me
reduced me to
an empty frame
yet i was able to
escape your play
for i am the bones
you could not break
Written by
Duende
Published 12th Apr 2024
Author's Note
About old wounds and scars.
...Placebo inspired series...
https://youtu.be/uN6d6NfDrXY
...Placebo inspired series...
https://youtu.be/uN6d6NfDrXY
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Re. The Bones
12th Apr 2024 3:09pm
Such a righteous write... I dated someone like that... a long time ago...
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12th Apr 2024 5:28pm
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Re. The Bones
12th Apr 2024 3:39pm
I swear you're writing my life with these incredibly vulnerable pieces, little sister...💖
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Re. The Bones
12th Apr 2024 5:05pm
It’s like looking in a mirror, I swear.
Your superpowers are authenticity and eloquence, D. I’m sure there are many more. You’re a treasure.
I’m so grateful to read the strong, phenomenal poetess’ on DUP. You’re all an inspiration.
Your superpowers are authenticity and eloquence, D. I’m sure there are many more. You’re a treasure.
I’m so grateful to read the strong, phenomenal poetess’ on DUP. You’re all an inspiration.
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Unfortunately more women fell into their trap
Authenticity and eloquence: can't ask for more - I'm actuallly a bit speechless. And yes, there are some strong and inspirational poetesses on here.
Thanks heaps for your comment and support, Her 💕
Authenticity and eloquence: can't ask for more - I'm actuallly a bit speechless. And yes, there are some strong and inspirational poetesses on here.
Thanks heaps for your comment and support, Her 💕
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12th Apr 2024 5:40pm
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Re. The Bones
12th Apr 2024 7:17pm
I got out of a relationship with a narcissist a few years back,what a fucking nightmare, constantly on guard like what’s next??? It was hard to escape too!
Nice writing though.
Nice writing though.
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13th Apr 2024 5:40am
It's a nightmare indeed and fucking hard to escape from.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment!
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment!
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12th Apr 2024 9:47pm
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Re. The Bones
12th Apr 2024 10:34pm
No amount of words or sticks or stones will break my bones …. I changed the saying for you… this is much better
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13th Apr 2024 5:42am
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Re: Re. The Bones
14th Apr 2024 9:32am
Dear Ethan, the smiles you brought by mentioning Brian Molko - I adore that guy to pieces. Not a lot of people know Placebo, let alone Brian (and Stefan) so for you to know them made my day. They are unapologetically themselves and stay true to their sound, whether people like it or not. A gem among these parts > I can't ask for more, but so are you 💚
With love, Duende
With love, Duende
Re. The Bones
14th Apr 2024 9:22am
very well expressed how the demons trample the blossoming flowerrs. Good u excaped from the clutches of fox in the skin og lion.
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14th Apr 2024 9:36am
It wasn't easy to escape, but I did and came out stronger.
Thanks for the visit and comment, I appreciate it.
Thanks for the visit and comment, I appreciate it.