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Protège Moi
it creeps up inside
rips me to pieces
it suffocates me
estranges me
alienates me
all that once
was familiar
seems gone
it screams & it
rages i'm fading
all feels so vague
i'm lost can't see
through the fog
Les fantômes
i can't seem to
tame the desire
and devils, protect
me from what i want
rips me to pieces
it suffocates me
estranges me
alienates me
all that once
was familiar
seems gone
it screams & it
rages i'm fading
all feels so vague
i'm lost can't see
through the fog
Les fantômes
i can't seem to
tame the desire
and devils, protect
me from what i want
Author's Note
About old wounds and scars.
...Placebo inspired series...
https://youtu.be/78gnqecSEw8
...Placebo inspired series...
https://youtu.be/78gnqecSEw8
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Re. Protège Moi
11th Apr 2024 5:02pm
Re: Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 10:32am
What a beautiful comment.
Thanks, also for the reading list.
I appreciate you, PoetSpeak.
Thanks, also for the reading list.
I appreciate you, PoetSpeak.
Re. Protège Moi
11th Apr 2024 5:32pm
Re: Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 10:32am
Re. Protège Moi
11th Apr 2024 6:01pm
Re: Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 10:32am
Re. Protège Moi
11th Apr 2024 9:31pm
This is so...relatable. Feels very familiar to my scars. Wasting no words, little sis
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12th Apr 2024 10:34am
Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 10:38am
The heartache and feeling of vagueness is haunting.
So much said with so few words, a gift you have, D.
So much said with so few words, a gift you have, D.
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Re: Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 3:04pm
Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 3:09pm
A poignant piece,
The dissonance between need and want is deafening.
Great ink
The dissonance between need and want is deafening.
Great ink
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Re: Re. Protège Moi
12th Apr 2024 5:26pm
Thanks heaps for your comment.
"Deafening" almost ended up in this piece, it made me smile you saw that.
"Deafening" almost ended up in this piece, it made me smile you saw that.
Re. Protège Moi
14th Apr 2024 2:13am
This poem gives the uncanny feeling of being in a dream where you are reaching for something in the blur and you can't grab it, can't move, yet it's too surreal to terrify you as a nightmare would. In a sense the feeling of something being there when it's not yet... nothing is there, yet you reach and the desire feels real. True grey space
Brilliant Duende
Brilliant Duende
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Re: Re. Protège Moi
14th Apr 2024 9:28am
That was exactly the feeling I wanted to convey, it made me smile big time you picked that up! The song which inspired the write (Protège Moi) was screaming for an uncanny feeling.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, I appreciate it.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, I appreciate it.