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Foreverness
Within my flesh
My spirit torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
My spirit torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
Published 8th Apr 2024
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8th Apr 2024 10:53am
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8th Apr 2024 11:51am
Really strong emotional content, I could feel it going in many directions. Internal struggles, pain, seeing no future. It really is an amazing write.
8th Apr 2024 12:56pm
8th Apr 2024 6:17pm
Though succinct, this poem packs a lot of emotion. I see a person with their hand outstretched, reaching desperately for the foreverness of tomorrow.
8th Apr 2024 9:28pm
