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Ecstasy
The height of pleasure.
Ecstasy 's earthquakes shake soul.
Mind crumbling climax.
Ecstasy 's earthquakes shake soul.
Mind crumbling climax.
Published 4th Apr 2024
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4th Apr 2024 9:57am
4th Apr 2024 10:02am
4th Apr 2024 10:35am
Ok second morning you got me to smile through some dark moments.
I'm really grateful for you
And thank you!
I'm really grateful for you
And thank you!
4th Apr 2024 12:42pm
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5th Apr 2024 4:53pm
So crazy i chose the word earthquake, we just had a 4.8 earthquake, lol.
It didn't shake my soul though haha,
.thanks so much for your nice comments!
It didn't shake my soul though haha,
.thanks so much for your nice comments!
7th Apr 2024 6:26pm
7th Apr 2024 6:36pm
10th Apr 2024 4:15pm
After the cuming storm the quake will subside. Unless there is an aftershock.
10th Apr 2024 4:29pm
12th Apr 2024 9:52pm
your concise and impactful haiku that captures the essence of intense pleasure and its effect on the soul. your poem's brevity adds to its potency, leaving a lasting impression on the reader. you effectively conveys the overwhelming and mind-altering nature of ecstasy in just a few words.
13th Apr 2024 8:31am
Aww. Thank you, your comments were so nice.
I like haiku's, it's a challenge to put strong expression in 3 lines.
I like haiku's, it's a challenge to put strong expression in 3 lines.
