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Return To The Secret Stream
I'm back.
But the stream already knew that.
My eyes feast on the clear sunlit bronze stream.
The bottom scattered with pebbles
possessing deep desires and last hope dreams.
Glossed white rushing rapids
are sliced in two by protruding stone.
Sometimes the meaning is
simply no meaning flowing over the stream's bones.
Free from the prison of my mind,
I meander barefoot
in the bubbling, sparkling water divine.
This hidden remarkable, the secret stream,
turns tranquil peace into creative steam.
But the stream already knew that.
My eyes feast on the clear sunlit bronze stream.
The bottom scattered with pebbles
possessing deep desires and last hope dreams.
Glossed white rushing rapids
are sliced in two by protruding stone.
Sometimes the meaning is
simply no meaning flowing over the stream's bones.
Free from the prison of my mind,
I meander barefoot
in the bubbling, sparkling water divine.
This hidden remarkable, the secret stream,
turns tranquil peace into creative steam.
Published 30th Mar 2024
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30th Mar 2024 1:21am
30th Mar 2024 1:25am
30th Mar 2024 3:25am
hypnosis of the water spirits can be pleasantly overwhelming...took me away...I like that...:
30th Mar 2024 6:53am
30th Mar 2024 6:15am
Dear D,
This write had me thinking of baptisms and starting anew. There is such a cleansing or washing away of the ick in life with water. I enjoyed the freshness and hope in this piece. Very calming and loved the imagery. H🌷
This write had me thinking of baptisms and starting anew. There is such a cleansing or washing away of the ick in life with water. I enjoyed the freshness and hope in this piece. Very calming and loved the imagery. H🌷
30th Mar 2024 6:56am
Thank you for reading and lovely comments. I do feel like just sitting, staring at the sun sparkling on
the water cleansed my mind.
the water cleansed my mind.
30th Mar 2024 10:18am
Hello Debbie,
You went back for a second time? Your description is stellar. You always have such a way with words. This poem makes me want to dive into that picture and stay awhile. Perfect!
You went back for a second time? Your description is stellar. You always have such a way with words. This poem makes me want to dive into that picture and stay awhile. Perfect!
30th Mar 2024 11:06am
Hi! Yes I've been going there on the days I get a break.
Thank you for saying such nice things and I'm glad you liked it.
I want to put the actual pictures I took but the file is too large, lol
Thank you for saying such nice things and I'm glad you liked it.
I want to put the actual pictures I took but the file is too large, lol
30th Mar 2024 12:43pm
Thank you for bringing us back!!
I agree with K.O.
Your words make me want to bathe here.
I agree with K.O.
Your words make me want to bathe here.
30th Mar 2024 12:58pm
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30th Mar 2024 1:11pm
Definitely a space worth revisiting. A moment of calm in a world of chaos
30th Mar 2024 1:36pm
You nailed it. That's exactly what it was, a moment of calm in my own world of chaos.
I try to share that peace, with whoever needs.some.
I'm at my best writing when it's visual, when I describe what I see.
Thx for reading!!!
I try to share that peace, with whoever needs.some.
I'm at my best writing when it's visual, when I describe what I see.
Thx for reading!!!
1st Apr 2024 12:46pm
Nice way to recapture the momentous inspiration of this place. Kind of like a euphoric recollection or memory being realized again. Upon this fathom, there is solid and balanced escape coming back. Anxiety is washed away. Anyway, I like how you capture different meaning and philosophy in relation to the metaphors you use. Almost more to ponder this time back around, kind of like revisiting a place once inhabited after being gone and maturing for a while. That's just some of the feeling I get from this. Thanks for sharing!
1st Apr 2024 5:31pm
