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Confessional
Dear God
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Dear God
Oh let me dream
Let me live in a dream
Yearn
Hazily
In a smoke
Observe
Laugh.
Written by
a_methyste
(hlightdroid)
Published
24th Mar 2024
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Re. Dear God
crimsin
(Unveiling)
24th Mar 2024 4:07pm
my imagination will serve me someday I hope your dreams of smoke suffice...
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a_methyste
(hlightdroid)
24th Mar 2024 6:35pm
Thank you dear for the kind words.
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Re. Dear God
JiltedJohnny
24th Mar 2024 6:44pm
Hoi hoi
Beauty and simplicity.
God will have no trouble understanding this.
A lovely piece of work.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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a_methyste
(hlightdroid)
24th Mar 2024 7:58pm
God will help us on our journey to becoming the beauty he is.
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Re. Dear God
Northern_Soul
24th Mar 2024 7:36pm
I wanted to drown in the poetry of this.
That’s it.
That’s all I’ve got.
Somehow it feels enough.
-M
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a_methyste
(hlightdroid)
24th Mar 2024 7:57pm
We all want to drown in there...live in beauty. Thank you for stopping by and reading.
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Re. Dear God
Ambiensse
(Richard G)
24th Mar 2024 8:59pm
Highlighted and honest
Just good words
Richard
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a_methyste
(hlightdroid)
24th Mar 2024 9:07pm
Thank you dear.
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