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Unclaimed
I never claimed to be a poet.
The words come to me,
In twisted mysteries.
I do enjoy it.
All the leeps and bound,
And tumbling sounds.
Breathing deep.
Until I feel the ground,
Swallow me whole.
My eternal soul,
I never claimed who I am.
This person.
These hands.
These thoughts.
Unchangeable demands.
Passion creeps in.
Every crevice.
Every word.
Every syllable.
Yet unheard.
I never claimed anything at all.
Until you.
The words come to me,
In twisted mysteries.
I do enjoy it.
All the leeps and bound,
And tumbling sounds.
Breathing deep.
Until I feel the ground,
Swallow me whole.
My eternal soul,
I never claimed who I am.
This person.
These hands.
These thoughts.
Unchangeable demands.
Passion creeps in.
Every crevice.
Every word.
Every syllable.
Yet unheard.
I never claimed anything at all.
Until you.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 24th Mar 2024
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Re. Unclaimed
24th Mar 2024 12:28pm
Hoi hoi
Part of your poem says: ‘the words came to me’.
And a lot of people writing songs or poems have this feeling. The ideas are going round and all we have to do is grab one and rope the rest in.
I guess we’ll never know, but it’s an interesting thought.
I like your write a lot. A whole lot.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus
Part of your poem says: ‘the words came to me’.
And a lot of people writing songs or poems have this feeling. The ideas are going round and all we have to do is grab one and rope the rest in.
I guess we’ll never know, but it’s an interesting thought.
I like your write a lot. A whole lot.
Thank you for writing and posting.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Unclaimed
24th Mar 2024 12:31pm
Re. Unclaimed
24th Mar 2024 12:32pm
Amazing wording in this one.
All the leeps and bound,
And tumbling sounds > that just rolls of the tongue.
Welcome to the Deep, lady :-)
All the leeps and bound,
And tumbling sounds > that just rolls of the tongue.
Welcome to the Deep, lady :-)
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24th Mar 2024 12:34pm
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24th Mar 2024 2:18pm
Re. Unclaimed
25th Mar 2024 12:03pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely excellent queen 👸 welcome 🙏 again to dup!!
Keep up the brilliant musing!!
Also please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Keep up the brilliant musing!!
Also please keep 🙏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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25th Mar 2024 2:57pm
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26th Mar 2024 12:38pm
Re. Unclaimed
26th Mar 2024 5:27pm
Whether you claim it or not, clearly you're a poet! Fabulous entry! Good luck with the comp!
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27th Mar 2024 1:04am
Re. Unclaimed
15th Jul 2024 8:41pm
We do not crethe art, the art chooses us as a medium, an outlet into our world from the greate beyond, from whence we came, and to thus we shall return.
Xxx
Xxx
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15th Jul 2024 8:44pm