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weeping rain

no breathing
wind,
in truth
my night
black,
a thing
to hide,
confusing hands,
the weeping
rain spying
without echos,
then again
in
my mind,
time pounded
outside,
doing their
slow living,
slim down
and erased.
Written by wolfatthedoor1966
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it is still as steady now as it has been since its conception earlier this morning
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