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Commited For What?
I was wrong earlier in my last poem
winter has returned, again
time for bed
Depression
Home is where I long to be
let them come when they will
they'll play there little games
I'm the only earth man left in town
Asylum?
sentenced the only one of a group
Survivor
summer lights in my mind
tomorrow is a whole new day
winter has returned, again
time for bed
Depression
Home is where I long to be
let them come when they will
they'll play there little games
I'm the only earth man left in town
Asylum?
sentenced the only one of a group
Survivor
summer lights in my mind
tomorrow is a whole new day
Published 15th Mar 2024
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15th Mar 2024 9:36pm
Look at you, putting a positive twist at the end.
Who are you and what did you do with my friend?!
I enjoyed this, K.O.
Who are you and what did you do with my friend?!
I enjoyed this, K.O.
15th Mar 2024 10:27pm
Just read my stuff day by day. I'll be changing these poems up like the weather. I appreciate the comments, the read and the support.
15th Mar 2024 10:52pm
15th Mar 2024 10:54pm
I love all the seasons. They each have a special place in my heart. Thanks for reading.
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16th Mar 2024 10:27am
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16th Mar 2024 11:00am
Appreciate that. My writings aren't going to solve anything, but I look at it as a realist.
