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Slow Dancing
I used to dance on his feet
When I didn’t he would get frustrated that I always had to take the lead
I think it was just a precursor to how things were going to be
Slow dancing with daddy
When I didn’t he would get frustrated that I always had to take the lead
I think it was just a precursor to how things were going to be
Slow dancing with daddy
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I’ve been told by men to let go, stop trying to always be in control.
I’ve been told by men to let go, stop trying to always be in control.
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Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 9:04am
That's one of my biggest problems, the need for control.
Now I see how so much is out of my control and it's scary.
I'm learning though......to let go.
I love that your poems show your vulnerability to issues alot of us feel.
I always leave your words feeling understood. ❤️
Now I see how so much is out of my control and it's scary.
I'm learning though......to let go.
I love that your poems show your vulnerability to issues alot of us feel.
I always leave your words feeling understood. ❤️
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Re: Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 7:57pm
Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 9:22am
Great write Mary. Control is a big factor in many people's lives.
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Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 10:14am
Ah... control... seizing it... releasing it... the bliss of the switch... nice write my dear...
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15th Mar 2024 7:58pm
Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 10:26am
Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 10:43am
A life lesson wrapped up in a sweet memory...
Lovely poem in it's simplicity.
❤️k
Lovely poem in it's simplicity.
❤️k
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Re: Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 7:59pm
Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 6:52pm
Seconding Sandoval
That's a heavy cloud about to unleash the most furious storm, great foreshadowing.
That's a heavy cloud about to unleash the most furious storm, great foreshadowing.
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Re. Slow Dancing
15th Mar 2024 7:59pm
Yeah, I agree be yourself. You just have to find someone that compliments you, your yin to his yang, or visa versa.
LJ
LJ
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15th Mar 2024 8:01pm
Re. Slow Dancing
16th Mar 2024 2:50pm
Re. Slow Dancing
16th Mar 2024 3:24pm
There's generally a solid reason we tend to need control. Not having it when we needed it most. The ones who understand that & are patient are golden...though few & far between. We know we can rely on ourselves...not as confident in relying on others. The self-reflection in this is beautiful
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Re: Re. Slow Dancing
16th Mar 2024 3:34pm
Oh believe me, I’m aware of all the reasons.
I’m learning to rely on myself more and not search for what I need in others.
But If I find the genie in the bottle, just once…
I’m learning to rely on myself more and not search for what I need in others.
But If I find the genie in the bottle, just once…