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I burned that fucker down
I finally did it.
Took all the napalm stored up in my heart --
the apologies, the fears
the pleas, the tears
the sleepless nights
the silent fights
confessions, concessions
questions and obsessions
childhood trauma
relationship drama
petty suspicions
demands and conditions
intrusive thoughts
oughts and naughts
accusations
intimidations
myth and mystery
ancient history
wounds and scars
snuffed out stars
bad excuses
old abuses
daddy issues
bloody tissues --
All the shit
that I could fit.
Wrapped it up in searing rage
tossed it over my shoulder --
and turned the page.
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Author's Note
Alcohol, heavy metal, violent movie... and a pinch of truth. Let's see where the pieces fall.
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Re. I burned that fucker down
15th Mar 2024 1:54am
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15th Mar 2024 9:52am
Re. I burned that fucker down
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15th Mar 2024 9:53am
Re. I burned that fucker down
Dear K,
Inspirational. The list of pain is rolled up and torched and to me, I see this as the best moving on party ever. Gives me courage to light a match and flip off a good many on my pain list. Thank you for the juice to do so.
Great piece. 🔥
H🌷
Inspirational. The list of pain is rolled up and torched and to me, I see this as the best moving on party ever. Gives me courage to light a match and flip off a good many on my pain list. Thank you for the juice to do so.
Great piece. 🔥
H🌷
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Re: Re. I burned that fucker down
15th Mar 2024 9:56am
Re. I burned that fucker down
15th Mar 2024 10:24am
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Last night it was Halestorm... this morning's workout list included RATM and Limp Bizkit and Metallica and.... I dunno, if it makes me grit my teeth it's in the list! 😎
And when this storm passes, I'll revert back to introspective folk or happy dance-pop. Or whatever. (Except country. That's where I draw the line. 😆)
Edit: thank you for the read and kind comment! You got me distracted with a music conversation. Unless you were asking whether I prefer copper or tin, in which case I was waaay off base.
❤️k
And when this storm passes, I'll revert back to introspective folk or happy dance-pop. Or whatever. (Except country. That's where I draw the line. 😆)
Edit: thank you for the read and kind comment! You got me distracted with a music conversation. Unless you were asking whether I prefer copper or tin, in which case I was waaay off base.
❤️k
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Re: Re. I burned that fucker down
15th Mar 2024 11:59pm
There will be better days ahead. Keep moving forward!
Thanks for reading
😎k
Thanks for reading
😎k
Anonymous
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15th Mar 2024 6:58pm
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Re: Re. I burned that fucker down
16th Mar 2024 00:03am
Yes indeed. Doing something to force the issue feels better than sitting around waiting for... nothing.
Thanks for stopping by to read & comment!
😎k
Thanks for stopping by to read & comment!
😎k
Re. I burned that fucker down
16th Mar 2024 4:17am
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16th Mar 2024 10:10am
Re. I burned that fucker down
16th Mar 2024 2:29pm
Re: Re. I burned that fucker down
16th Mar 2024 10:35pm
Well hullo stranger!!! I see you! Thanks for dropping in!
Pen love back atcha,
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Pen love back atcha,
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Re. I burned that fucker down
16th Mar 2024 3:19pm
I swear I have annual bonfires & every one clears a smidgen more space. Brilliant!
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16th Mar 2024 10:36pm
Re. I burned that fucker down
18th Mar 2024 2:08am
Re: Re. I burned that fucker down
18th Mar 2024 1:14pm
Clearing out the deadwood to make room for new life.
Thank you, Wally
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Thank you, Wally
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Re. I burned that fucker down
4th Apr 2024 2:57am
Wooo hooooo! Kick-ass poem that did my old heart good. Lovely to see you rockin' out.
Mega-awe.
Mega-awe.
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Re: Re. I burned that fucker down
4th Apr 2024 12:19pm
Many thanks, Mrd! I'm glad you brought my attention back to this one; it gave me a grin and a little extra energy for my day.
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