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Good Girl
i blush as
i read these
words it’s
been a while
my mind
goes
haywire
don’t know
what to write
so my only
reply is sigh
It’s okay,
you get
used to it
immediately
my body
responds
my breath
accelerates
my cunt
pulsates
from desire
his previous
words still
linger inside
I aim for
much more
than only
your poetry
God have
mercy
with me
his impact
is huge, his
influence
indisputable
insecurity
and lust
intertwine
i am aware
of the power
of words
& i have
some skills
but damn
so does he
I don't like
easy- I want
what most
men can’t have
/
\
/
& that's how you
seduce a sapiophile
i read these
words it’s
been a while
my mind
goes
haywire
don’t know
what to write
so my only
reply is sigh
It’s okay,
you get
used to it
immediately
my body
responds
my breath
accelerates
my cunt
pulsates
from desire
his previous
words still
linger inside
I aim for
much more
than only
your poetry
God have
mercy
with me
his impact
is huge, his
influence
indisputable
insecurity
and lust
intertwine
i am aware
of the power
of words
& i have
some skills
but damn
so does he
I don't like
easy- I want
what most
men can’t have
/
\
/
& that's how you
seduce a sapiophile
Written by
Duende
Published 14th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Oldie - about OkCupid :-)
https://youtu.be/cGvZyrhObrg
https://youtu.be/cGvZyrhObrg
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Re. Good Girl
14th Mar 2024 5:08pm
A professed Sapiophile here! Intellect and manners melt me instantly!
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. Good Girl
15th Mar 2024 10:58am
Ah yes, rough on the outside, eloquent on the inside - that's my kinda guy.
Thanks for your comment, Ahavati. xox
Thanks for your comment, Ahavati. xox
Re. Good Girl
14th Mar 2024 5:42pm
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15th Mar 2024 10:58am
Re. Good Girl
14th Mar 2024 8:54pm
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Re: Re. Good Girl
15th Mar 2024 11:00am
I do hope so, thanks for wishing me the right Sir.
Your words are appreciated :-)
Your words are appreciated :-)
Re. Good Girl
15th Mar 2024 3:50pm
DAMN, what a well written poem! Can't really say it better than that! 🙂
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15th Mar 2024 4:03pm
Re. Good Girl
16th Mar 2024 12:44pm
I really liked this one. I wish I had your skills of bringing such energy and feeling in such short pulses. This was hot.
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Re: Re. Good Girl
16th Mar 2024 7:06pm
That's a huge compliment, thanks heaps.
As for skills: we all have different skills, which makes us unique.
As for skills: we all have different skills, which makes us unique.
Re. Good Girl
16th Mar 2024 3:10pm
Whew! The poem...the imagery...the solid landing...everything about this piece is stellar! Little sister, this is brilliant!
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Re: Re. Good Girl
16th Mar 2024 7:06pm
Oh wow, that's such an amazing compliment.
...wasn't expecting brilliant on this piece.
Thanks heaps for the smiles, my dearest sister.
...wasn't expecting brilliant on this piece.
Thanks heaps for the smiles, my dearest sister.
Re. Good Girl
21st Mar 2024 2:12am
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21st Mar 2024 7:00am
Re. Good Girl
31st Mar 2024 7:02pm
Thank you for also entering this one, I feel like this speaks to me ✨😂
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Re: Re. Good Girl
1st Apr 2024 3:14pm
It's my pleasure lady. Thanks for the visit and for leaving your thoughts, glad to hear it speaks to you :-)