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Pinnacle
i know i'm not
the only one
who carries
the weight
of failure
insecurity
shame &
frustrations
to never get
past the edge
of pleasure
to feel the
sensations
contractions
& afterglow
just for once
i want to know
what it feels like
to have the big O
the only one
who carries
the weight
of failure
insecurity
shame &
frustrations
to never get
past the edge
of pleasure
to feel the
sensations
contractions
& afterglow
just for once
i want to know
what it feels like
to have the big O
Published 13th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Shivers & goosebumps:
https://youtu.be/xI5HmmizYwY
https://youtu.be/xI5HmmizYwY
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13th Mar 2024 4:35pm
14th Mar 2024 6:38am
13th Mar 2024 4:41pm
Oh my goodness, little sister. You have no idea...I have one in drafts I've been too afraid to share along similar lines. Perhaps one day I'll pluck up the courage & air it out. Definitely...most absolutely definitely...not alone
14th Mar 2024 6:38am
Speechless here, my sister.
I know I'm not alone in this, but it feels lonely.
As for you being too afraid to share: you commented on my piece, that's a start :-)
I know I'm not alone in this, but it feels lonely.
As for you being too afraid to share: you commented on my piece, that's a start :-)
13th Mar 2024 4:53pm
13th Mar 2024 5:26pm
What a phenomenal photograph.
Says all and then some ...
Wishing you ...you know
BIG
Says all and then some ...
Wishing you ...you know
BIG
14th Mar 2024 6:44am
That's a beautiful compliment.
Thanks you very much, PoetSpeak.
And yes, I know...
Thanks you very much, PoetSpeak.
And yes, I know...
13th Mar 2024 10:28pm
this is raw and personal. wishing you there crossing the finish line.
14th Mar 2024 6:47am
13th Mar 2024 11:23pm
14th Mar 2024 10:04am
I will leave that to others, way too much pressure.
..the O didn't go unnoticed, gave me a laugh :-)
Thanks for feeling me, Ahavati, I appreciate you. xo
..the O didn't go unnoticed, gave me a laugh :-)
Thanks for feeling me, Ahavati, I appreciate you. xo
14th Mar 2024 2:46pm
14th Mar 2024 3:00pm
