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Empty Hopes
One year from now will I arrive?
A premonition of death & lies
complicity burns the remembrance
criminals sleep, compelling evidence
tight rope of hopes begin to fray
ghost of the sun hides in the shade
thoughts & memories dissolve & fade
one last breath where my body will lay
A premonition of death & lies
complicity burns the remembrance
criminals sleep, compelling evidence
tight rope of hopes begin to fray
ghost of the sun hides in the shade
thoughts & memories dissolve & fade
one last breath where my body will lay
Published 13th Mar 2024
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13th Mar 2024 2:07pm
13th Mar 2024 2:15pm
13th Mar 2024 2:16pm
"tight rope of hopes begin to fray
ghost of the sun hides in the shade"
Oh how I love those lines, amazing. A dark and solid write.
LJ
ghost of the sun hides in the shade"
Oh how I love those lines, amazing. A dark and solid write.
LJ
13th Mar 2024 2:18pm
Thanks LJ. I appreciate you coming by and reading plus commenting. I need to go back and read some of your older poems.
keith
keith
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