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Im sad
I'm sad...cause I'm hurt
I'm sad...cause I'm in pain
I'm sad...cause my life repeats the same
I'm sad...cause it constantly rains above my head
I'm sad...cause I haven't meet a true friend
I'm sad...cause I'm still alive an not dead
I'm sad...cause I'm still alone
I'm sad....cause I've failed to complete my goal
I'm sad...cause still haven't found a girl to call my own
I'm sad...cause I have no place To go
I'm sad...cause my future in danger
I'm sad...cause these nagitive feeling turn to Anger
I'm sad...cause I'm stressed
I'm sad... cause my hart Beats slowly within my cheast
I'm sad...cause I don't know if my prays Been answerd
I'm sad...cause I'm tired of feeling sad
But ill be happy when the storm finally pass.
I'm sad...cause I'm in pain
I'm sad...cause my life repeats the same
I'm sad...cause it constantly rains above my head
I'm sad...cause I haven't meet a true friend
I'm sad...cause I'm still alive an not dead
I'm sad...cause I'm still alone
I'm sad....cause I've failed to complete my goal
I'm sad...cause still haven't found a girl to call my own
I'm sad...cause I have no place To go
I'm sad...cause my future in danger
I'm sad...cause these nagitive feeling turn to Anger
I'm sad...cause I'm stressed
I'm sad... cause my hart Beats slowly within my cheast
I'm sad...cause I don't know if my prays Been answerd
I'm sad...cause I'm tired of feeling sad
But ill be happy when the storm finally pass.
Published 20th Feb 2010
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20th Feb 2010 4:26pm
...that you are optimistic about the outcome when the storm does eventually pass. What you are saying here is totally honest, Alfredo - and you have presented it in an original way. But to make it even more attractive I think it would be a good idea if you made it a rule to always spellcheck your work before posting and perhaps get independent advice on grammar from someone if that's possible. Full marks for effort.
20th Feb 2010 7:43pm
Thank you honestly I'm not really a good speller
But I tried that's why I always keep a dictionary
I just now coming back into poetry its been awhile I've been writing poerty for 7 years and I'm still trying to learn new techniques thank you
Again an if I post more of my poems just comment me thank you.
But I tried that's why I always keep a dictionary
I just now coming back into poetry its been awhile I've been writing poerty for 7 years and I'm still trying to learn new techniques thank you
Again an if I post more of my poems just comment me thank you.
20th Feb 2010 8:39pm
Here, but ignoring the grammatical errors, its a real hit in my books.
It explains exactly how I felt, although It's sunny in my neck of the woods now, and I only hope that your storm can pass soon.
Keep writing hun, you're good at it.x
It explains exactly how I felt, although It's sunny in my neck of the woods now, and I only hope that your storm can pass soon.
Keep writing hun, you're good at it.x
