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Moonbeams
" There are no beautiful surfaces without a terrible depth" - Nietzsche
I contemplate, but I'm startled and seduced.
By the bone white gargantuan moon.
In it's sedating silence,
it sweetly loomed.
Over the dark lapping waters.
In attempt to calm my silent tortures.
Clouds, the steam
of day driven dreams.
Mingle with the moon's
brightest beams.
The shallow tide boasts
a turquoise ghostly glow.
To display the corals of
haunted thoughts lodged below.
Never fear the terror of your deep.
Submerged beneath is where
the wisdom sleeps.
I contemplate, but I'm startled and seduced.
By the bone white gargantuan moon.
In it's sedating silence,
it sweetly loomed.
Over the dark lapping waters.
In attempt to calm my silent tortures.
Clouds, the steam
of day driven dreams.
Mingle with the moon's
brightest beams.
The shallow tide boasts
a turquoise ghostly glow.
To display the corals of
haunted thoughts lodged below.
Never fear the terror of your deep.
Submerged beneath is where
the wisdom sleeps.
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Re. Moonbeams
12th Mar 2024 10:40am
Wherever that is, let's go! A dreamy,atmospheric piece. Magnificent imagery!
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12th Mar 2024 10:46am
Re. Moonbeams
12th Mar 2024 10:43am
Phenomenal.
Right now that’s all I’ve got. Because other than that and what KO. said, I’m pretty much speechless.
You so rock, my friend.
Right now that’s all I’ve got. Because other than that and what KO. said, I’m pretty much speechless.
You so rock, my friend.
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Re. Moonbeams
12th Mar 2024 4:17pm
I believe our subconscious hides a lot of answers to the mysteries in our lives. My interpretation was that this piece speaks to the subconscious. Good job.
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Re. Moonbeams
12th Mar 2024 4:44pm
Yes in a way it does. By our deep, I mean the subconscious. A lot can be unlocked in
our subconscious
Thx for reading, I appreciate.
our subconscious
Thx for reading, I appreciate.
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2024 2:32pm
It's the depths that make us. Beautiful
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