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Poetry Mojo
it's been over 5 years
that poetry left me
my muse died
i tried to write
closed my eyes
let words pass by
silence inside
no assonance
consonance
or alliteration
zero inspiration
so frustrating
on my laptop
lots of pieces
different topics
all over the place
shattered words
segmented verses
shadows of what was
where is my poetry mojo?
that poetry left me
my muse died
i tried to write
closed my eyes
let words pass by
silence inside
no assonance
consonance
or alliteration
zero inspiration
so frustrating
on my laptop
lots of pieces
different topics
all over the place
shattered words
segmented verses
shadows of what was
where is my poetry mojo?
Author's Note
At least it's coming back.
https://youtu.be/9eWewdTkghM
https://youtu.be/9eWewdTkghM
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Re. Poetry Mojo
9th Mar 2024 5:30pm
hello beautiful take those segmented pieces and put them together in a poem I call them Frankensteins and write every day even if it is a minimalist poem of a few words they are powerful sometimes... lastly not everything has to be fire it's like keeping an artistic journal or diary of where you thoughts have been... I understand I'm happy it is coming back to you by the way it's so good to see you 💕
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 6:53am
It's good to be back, dear Crimsin 💕
You are so right, not everything has to be fire - not every piece can be your best piece. I becoming milder towards myself.
Thanks for the visit :-)
You are so right, not everything has to be fire - not every piece can be your best piece. I becoming milder towards myself.
Thanks for the visit :-)
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9th Mar 2024 6:26pm
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 6:56am
Couldn't have said it any better than you did.
That you feel it is a huge compliment, thanks heaps :-)
That you feel it is a huge compliment, thanks heaps :-)
Re. Poetry Mojo
9th Mar 2024 6:54pm
I've had many muses and sometimes muses who became lovers. Long term muse relationships averaged 6 years. Short ones come and go. 2 @ 6 years.
The 3rd at 6 years would become 666.
Can't wait ...
Glad you are back and contributing again D.
The 3rd at 6 years would become 666.
Can't wait ...
Glad you are back and contributing again D.
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 7:00am
Some of my work is inspired by partners / lovers, but to me a muse can be anything. Having said that: relationships are a great source. One of the best.
Glad to hear you appreciate my contributions :)
...hope your 666 will come soon...
Glad to hear you appreciate my contributions :)
...hope your 666 will come soon...
Re. Poetry Mojo
9th Mar 2024 7:29pm
Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 7:02am
We all do, at least most of us.
Yes, I'm thinking it's back.
...thanks for your kinds words :-)
Yes, I'm thinking it's back.
...thanks for your kinds words :-)
Re. Poetry Mojo
9th Mar 2024 7:31pm
Memory muscle...the more we use it the easier it flows. It's still in your blood!
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 7:04am
True that - once it came back, it started to flow easier with each piece.
Thanks for your visit and words, dearest Willow.
Thanks for your visit and words, dearest Willow.
Re. Poetry Mojo
9th Mar 2024 11:38pm
From a reader's perspective, it's easily been worth the wait
(I have a much played Ólafur Arnald CD - but not heard this track before ... great, thank you).
(I have a much played Ólafur Arnald CD - but not heard this track before ... great, thank you).
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 7:08am
Good point, dear Josh.
Ólafur Arnald's work is amazing, happy to have introduced you to a new track.
As always: thanks for your thoughts, they're appreciated.
Ólafur Arnald's work is amazing, happy to have introduced you to a new track.
As always: thanks for your thoughts, they're appreciated.
Re. Poetry Mojo
Anonymous
10th Mar 2024 1:38am
Awe Duende, sorry for your loss. I went thru a time when I couldn’t write either, I looked other places to find inspiration, it didn’t work for a long time, but then there it was again. You’re a beautiful soul inside and out, this sweet ink shows it. Don’t give up on you, please. Purple luv & hugs 💜
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 7:12am
Hey my lovely flowergirl,
We all have been there, it's very frustrating.
Yet it's back. I missed you & this place.
Great to see you on my page again :-)
Love & hugs, D
We all have been there, it's very frustrating.
Yet it's back. I missed you & this place.
Great to see you on my page again :-)
Love & hugs, D
Re. Poetry Mojo
Anonymous
10th Mar 2024 7:54am
Wonderful Ink. Believe me, I've been there. Much Respect..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 8:09am
Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 1:17pm
My kind of poetry... nicely penned D... so glad you are back... DUP was not the same without you..
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
Thanks heaps for your comment and the reading list.
"DUP was not the same without you" > speechless & deeply moved, thank you for saying so.
It's good to be back, feels like coming home...
"DUP was not the same without you" > speechless & deeply moved, thank you for saying so.
It's good to be back, feels like coming home...
Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 2:41pm
Duende, My writing chops were also asleep and buried under a rock, until I found DUP 11 years ago.
In truth I still have major gaps in writing but somehow coming here and reading from others inspires me. Wonderful scribe you have here 👍🏻 btw know should know, you have been missed, sweet woman♥️
Jackie xo
In truth I still have major gaps in writing but somehow coming here and reading from others inspires me. Wonderful scribe you have here 👍🏻 btw know should know, you have been missed, sweet woman♥️
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. Poetry Mojo
10th Mar 2024 2:52pm
Dear Zazzles, sorry to hear you know how it feels. Seems we all (or at least most of us) have been there, these gaps. Maybe it's part of being a poet / writer?
Deeply moved that I have been missed, I missed you and the deep too. xoxo
Deeply moved that I have been missed, I missed you and the deep too. xoxo