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Early am Sunrise....
early sunlight shines upon the two of us
through our window
the am sun feels warm
we lean in and smile face to face
nature takes over
youre hard
I am wet
we make love
then we fuck
as animals do
we fall into each other
into a deep, wonderful embrace
enticing us to sleep
bringing with it,
so much love
Nature at her best...
through our window
the am sun feels warm
we lean in and smile face to face
nature takes over
youre hard
I am wet
we make love
then we fuck
as animals do
we fall into each other
into a deep, wonderful embrace
enticing us to sleep
bringing with it,
so much love
Nature at her best...
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Re. Early am Sunrise....
9th Mar 2024 3:51am
Make love first, that's nice
Then
Fuck like wild teenagers hopped up on lust and and aggression...
THAT'S the way she's done...
You brought it ML
BIG
RL AWARD
Then
Fuck like wild teenagers hopped up on lust and and aggression...
THAT'S the way she's done...
You brought it ML
BIG
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
9th Mar 2024 4:00am
Thanks babe.
Thats how nature wanted us to behave....
all in or dont show up
<3
Thats how nature wanted us to behave....
all in or dont show up
<3
Re. Early am Sunrise....
9th Mar 2024 3:56am
You're a wild Lady, we love the emotion within the piece. The burning off that nights rest like the sun burning off last night. Tight
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Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
9th Mar 2024 4:01am
Re. Early am Sunrise....
11th Mar 2024 1:14am
Bliss is rare, so embrace it when it happens. This write of yours is a great example of the simplicity of how easy it is to love and appreciate it.
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Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
11th Mar 2024 1:51am
Thanks, love. Its easy, yet hard yet simple, yet complicated .However, if you are with the right person, its all works out. <3
Re. Early am Sunrise....
11th Mar 2024 2:13am
I hope it wasn't a work day as you may have been late. Enjoyed the spontaneity of this write. 😊
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Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
11th Mar 2024 2:19am
Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
11th Mar 2024 2:25am
Is that... For My Leave Allocation? or the slightly ruder... Fuck Me, Late Arriving!
I'm making all of this up, obviously! Haha! 😆
I'm making all of this up, obviously! Haha! 😆
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Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
11th Mar 2024 2:53am
Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
Ah, okkkayyy... the 'sick leave' option. Smart! There are so many possible meanings I read just now but I'm not gonna repeat them here! 🤣
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Re. Early am Sunrise....
15th Mar 2024 3:15am
The rapture of love with that truly brilliant last line. Brillant and steamy my friend.
John
John
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Re: Re. Early am Sunrise....
15th Mar 2024 3:19am
Re. Early am Sunrise....
18th Mar 2024 2:40am
Nothing like making love and fucking while the sun is rising! Very nice ink, ML!
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23rd Mar 2024 1:13am
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