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The Abandoned House
Every forest harbors secrets.
The bark and branches are the keepers.
The abandoned house towered,
in a paralysis of time.
The only thing alive
was the strangling of the vines.
It stood in dilapidation
with a menacing expression.
Inside the air thick with voiceless confessions.
Heard somewhere in my shaking soul.
Hollow window eyes
possess the shatters of time.
Who were the inhabitants?
And are they alive?
It's time to go inside.
The bark and branches are the keepers.
The abandoned house towered,
in a paralysis of time.
The only thing alive
was the strangling of the vines.
It stood in dilapidation
with a menacing expression.
Inside the air thick with voiceless confessions.
Heard somewhere in my shaking soul.
Hollow window eyes
possess the shatters of time.
Who were the inhabitants?
And are they alive?
It's time to go inside.
Author's Note
I like abandoned places.
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Re. The Abandoned House
7th Mar 2024 10:17pm
There's a ton of urban exploring out here on LI. I've gone a bunch of times and also have gotten caught twice.
Great poem, cool atmosphere and the story telling was spot on to keep the creepiness alive.
Great poem, cool atmosphere and the story telling was spot on to keep the creepiness alive.
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7th Mar 2024 10:20pm
Thank you. There was an abandoned village in the Watching Reservation in NJ
I used to venture inside and try to write ghost stories. 👻
I used to venture inside and try to write ghost stories. 👻
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7th Mar 2024 10:23pm
Are you sure you want to go inside, Debbie? I must admit, I took a sharp intake of breath upon reading that last line. AMAZING! 😉
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7th Mar 2024 10:24pm
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7th Mar 2024 11:49pm
We also love places like this, we love this pieces and pic. A really tight one Lady
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8th Mar 2024 2:05am
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2024 1:12pm
The absence beckons, doesn't it?
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9th Mar 2024 10:16am
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This house looks like haunted by an evil spirit, from the movie Reincarnation D.Damiani, Amytyville.
Creepy your words and screetching with fear.
i like it that eerie atmosphere.and the horror movies are my favorite flicks. thanks for sharing your fears
Creepy your words and screetching with fear.
i like it that eerie atmosphere.and the horror movies are my favorite flicks. thanks for sharing your fears
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9th Mar 2024 1:43pm
Thank you, I like it too. My dark side. Menacing houses don't scare me, I want to get inside, lol
Thx for reading!
Thx for reading!
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9th Mar 2024 6:13pm
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10th Mar 2024 10:29am
Damn, never wanted to explore creepy houses before, but now I do!
I love how you do that, make me want to explore the darker side of things I usually avoid.
Excellent write, my friend.
I love how you do that, make me want to explore the darker side of things I usually avoid.
Excellent write, my friend.
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10th Mar 2024 10:35am
I'll hold your hand, we are going in, lol
Never be afraid to explore the dark, you are a beacon of light.
Thx for reading
Never be afraid to explore the dark, you are a beacon of light.
Thx for reading