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Dreams Dreams Dreams
I am a monster.
I have killed.
In my dreams,
I have no will.
I see the blood
I scream in fright.
I try to wake
But can't at night.
I am a monster.
I have killed.
In my dreams,
I have no will.
I see the gun
I let it pop.
Into my head,
With one last shot.
I am a monster.
I have killed.
In my dreams,
I have no will.
I have killed.
In my dreams,
I have no will.
I see the blood
I scream in fright.
I try to wake
But can't at night.
I am a monster.
I have killed.
In my dreams,
I have no will.
I see the gun
I let it pop.
Into my head,
With one last shot.
I am a monster.
I have killed.
In my dreams,
I have no will.
Published 2nd May 2012
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2nd May 2012 8:52pm
Enough written and yet left untold that this has me wondering. First thought is the monster a creation made purely on your own? When you write, "I see the gun
I let it pop.
Into my head," is the gun's nozzle being directed towards you or rather symbolic of a bullet going off in your head? (or neither?)
Perhaps these are questions you want each reader to deal with in their own way?
I let it pop.
Into my head," is the gun's nozzle being directed towards you or rather symbolic of a bullet going off in your head? (or neither?)
Perhaps these are questions you want each reader to deal with in their own way?
2nd May 2012 11:31pm
Welllll. To answer all of your questions in one point. I honestly dont know the answers. So i guess i just want the reader to imagine what was going on in my head when i wrte this. And just let their imaginations run wild.
3rd May 2012 00:00am
