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In the Shadows of Passion
passions ignite bathed in golden light
love like twilight's embrace encompassing all
desire and beauty intertwined fireworks ignite
nothing exist but what is going to unfold
soft glow of moonlight shines down
whispers of longing in gentle breeze
fingers touches love's tender tease
entwined lovers dance in bliss
nature's tender kiss caress
urges the cohesion of words
translated into two souls lost
in blooms of desire as wildflowers
Subtle and sensual sight and sound
sadly awake from dreams, after glow, profound
love like twilight's embrace encompassing all
desire and beauty intertwined fireworks ignite
nothing exist but what is going to unfold
soft glow of moonlight shines down
whispers of longing in gentle breeze
fingers touches love's tender tease
entwined lovers dance in bliss
nature's tender kiss caress
urges the cohesion of words
translated into two souls lost
in blooms of desire as wildflowers
Subtle and sensual sight and sound
sadly awake from dreams, after glow, profound
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23rd Feb 2024 2:50pm
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23rd Feb 2024 2:55pm
That final couplet is golden. I've had dreams like that, and the afterglow was, indeed, profound.
Very soft imagery, Grace. Ethereal, like a dream.
Very soft imagery, Grace. Ethereal, like a dream.
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23rd Feb 2024 2:58pm
Maybe its just some past events that re-play in one's brain during sleep eh.
Thanks for reading Ahavati, always appreciated.
Thanks for reading Ahavati, always appreciated.
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Re. In the Shadows of Passion
27th Feb 2024 8:00am
"Subtle and sensual sight and sound
sadly awake from dreams, after glow, profound"
Loved this couplet at the end, it closes out very nicely.
Well done.
sadly awake from dreams, after glow, profound"
Loved this couplet at the end, it closes out very nicely.
Well done.
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27th Feb 2024 8:54am
I wanted something subtle, like a waking dream. I didn't actually manage to write what I wanted. Thank you for reading me Wally.