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These Dreams...
In this dream, we are together,
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that, right?
Will we one day allow...
One another properly into our respective hearts?
It would be a start.
So, where do we go from here?
Knowing...
It'll always remain my ambition,
To reach for you... outside these dreams!
Inside a naff café -
Chatting over coffee...
Smiling.
Ok, maybe I still desire the special grill but hey,
Don't be distracted -
It'll help me concentrate;
Not that I need to, because,
I have examined each cute dimple,
Hook, line and sinker, that exist,
On your pretty little face.
I love your story too...
In fact, I wanna learn so much more!
You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws;
Without them, you are NOT you, rather,
A cheap imitation -
And who needs that, right?
Will we one day allow...
One another properly into our respective hearts?
It would be a start.
So, where do we go from here?
Knowing...
It'll always remain my ambition,
To reach for you... outside these dreams!
Author's Note
(277) May today bring everyone hopeful wishes & lovely dreams! ❤
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13th Feb 2024 9:34am
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13th Feb 2024 2:38pm
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13th Feb 2024 3:28pm
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13th Feb 2024 3:55pm
It also happens to be my favourite lunch & or dinner combo. Totally unhealthy but isn't that always the way?! Thank you for reading, Joylyn. 😆
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13th Feb 2024 7:27pm
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13th Feb 2024 7:28pm
This entire poem made me smile. It has your wit and charm all over it and it’s romantic to boot. A perfect Billy poem.
Happy Day Before Valentine’s Day, my friend.
Happy Day Before Valentine’s Day, my friend.
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13th Feb 2024 7:31pm
It definitely has my thriftiness about it if nothing else, lol. Thank you Mary. 😊
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15th Feb 2024 2:36pm
I reading the soul of a man who have thoroughly savoured his "heartfelt gourmet" and found her richly catering to his expectations.
" Will we one day allow...
One another properly into our respective hearts?
It would be a start.
So, where do we go from here?"
I adore the fact that you accord your interest the respect to lead; despite putting all your cards in the table: "It'll always remain my ambition,
To reach for you... outside these dreams!"
You got me dancing to Billy Ocean's "Get outta my dreams, get into my car!" I pray you had a beautiful yester?
Xo!
" Will we one day allow...
One another properly into our respective hearts?
It would be a start.
So, where do we go from here?"
I adore the fact that you accord your interest the respect to lead; despite putting all your cards in the table: "It'll always remain my ambition,
To reach for you... outside these dreams!"
You got me dancing to Billy Ocean's "Get outta my dreams, get into my car!" I pray you had a beautiful yester?
Xo!
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15th Feb 2024 3:56pm
Lol! Lovin' the comment, Blue Rose, haha & naturally, the Billy Ocean vibe. I must take another listen to that delightfully cheerful track. Thanks for bringing some of your sunshine my way today. 😊
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16th Feb 2024 2:02pm
That's a lovely poem, Billy. Lucky one:) every woman's dream to be a dream of a dream. I am keeping this poem.
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17th Feb 2024 3:24am
I swear I commented last night. I was saying wow you have such a unique and romantic way with words. Its awe inspiring and heartfelt. I don't know why it didn't post or maybe I just thought I commented but im quite sure I did. This is one of the loveliest poems I've ever read. Wow.
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You're very welcome, seachelles & far too kind with your praise, lol. Thank you for the inspiration. ❤😊 https://youtu.be/zNgcYGgtf8M
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28th Feb 2024 3:35am
Thank you my friend...for everything. For tolerating my rants and for being there when I need you. Love, mischelle
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28th Feb 2024 3:35am
Thank you my friend...for everything. For tolerating my rants and for being there when I need you. Love, mischelle
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28th Feb 2024 4:11am
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28th Feb 2024 8:44am
I didn't mean to post that twice but you are so much more then u give yourself credit for , esp when it comes to words. Why don't u write a book of poetry,?
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Anonymous
17th Feb 2024 4:28am
Awwwwe. Snaggy, this is beautiful.
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17th Feb 2024 4:31am
Very kind of you to say so, pencil. Sometimes we need some cheeriness in our lives, it's true! Thank you. 😊
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17th Feb 2024 7:15pm
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18th Feb 2024 2:11am
It's rained here all day. Bleh!
This write of yours is the sunny part that I needed to cheer me up in here.
Its these simple moments like you described, that make for grand designs.
Of course we make mountains out of mole hills, we are writers, we make them tall and lush!
Wonderful write, Billy.
This write of yours is the sunny part that I needed to cheer me up in here.
Its these simple moments like you described, that make for grand designs.
Of course we make mountains out of mole hills, we are writers, we make them tall and lush!
Wonderful write, Billy.
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18th Feb 2024 5:14pm
It rained all day here too in the valleys actually, as it often does! It's certainly not grand gestures or indeed grand surroundings but grand designs, yeah, maybe. I think you're right! Loved the 'mountains out of molehills' remark too, lol. Thank you, Styxian. 😊
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19th Feb 2024 00:08am
A lovely write Billy . You honestly need to write more you are so talented. ❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏
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19th Feb 2024 00:12am
Thank you, Maple. I'm glad you found this one. Writing more is all I seem to hear these days, lol but I do find it difficult to write regularly, unfortunately. 😊
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Thank you, Casey, aka BooksMusicAndMe. I hope I will be able to give you more in due course. 😊
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25th Feb 2024 1:36am
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25th Feb 2024 1:41am
Not as sweet however as that tempting brown derby warm doughnut, topped with ice cream, drizzled with chocolate sauce 'n' chopped nuts, right, lol? ...Thank you most kindly for reading. ;-)
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28th Apr 2024 8:24pm
"You are perfectly imperfect with all of your flaws"
My favorite line. And I love a good coffee shop.
My favorite line. And I love a good coffee shop.
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28th Apr 2024 8:26pm
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29th Sep 2024 1:40pm
What a heart warming piece this it, it made smile.
"You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws" > that is so beautifully said and so true.
Thank you for sharing such an uplifting gem, with a hint of bittersweet.
"You are perfectly imperfect with all your flaws" > that is so beautifully said and so true.
Thank you for sharing such an uplifting gem, with a hint of bittersweet.
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29th Sep 2024 2:53pm
I'm not pretending that flaws are good... (floors with elevators are better, lol!) they're a pain in the ass to be honest but it's learning to tolerate them that is the trick, the key to possible success/harmony. Yes, you're right about that bittersweet tinge. Thank you, Duende. 🤗