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forever
forever
is such
a very
long time,
but
too short
compared
to
the days
that i
will carry
my love
for you.
is such
a very
long time,
but
too short
compared
to
the days
that i
will carry
my love
for you.
Published 12th Feb 2024
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12th Feb 2024 4:30am
Dear J,
Such a lovely poem. The romance is gentle and sweet. I enjoyed this greatly. H🌷
Such a lovely poem. The romance is gentle and sweet. I enjoyed this greatly. H🌷
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12th Feb 2024 5:41pm
Forever is possible. These days with options and lack of patience people run. The piece is very powerful in a lot of ways.
Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 3:43pm
A true dichotomy, that. And very accurate with emotions
13th Feb 2024 11:34pm
