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Devil
it is electric what you do to me
you transfigure a moment into something sexual
shapeshifting into the beast you are
I am deeply turned on
I want to fuck like the animals, I growl
primal and hedonistic
giving you my lust in mewling pangs of desire
disturb the energy and wake the sleeping night
urges come wave after wave
seeing visions we succumb to the heat
we see lewdly posed angels carnal in nature...fucking
stirring the phantasmal with their passions
Divinity in the flesh is our coming together
ejaculate your anger into me
let me taste your hate on my tongue
swollen lusts, I feel you
you fill me up with your seduction
the demons defile themselves in sacred honesty
vile and ready seething with hatred
you penetrate my soul and as they watch on
tempting fate you cum inside me
a sovereign act no mortal's bliss
the air shifts leaving ripples of ecstasy
through the torn universes
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Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 00:28am
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12th Feb 2024 00:29am
thank you graciously dearest Visions I love hearing from you I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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12th Feb 2024 00:31am
Thank you! I love reading and viewing your imagery. Your poems captivate and you have cool cinema like presence to your work.
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Re: Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 00:39am
thank you that's a really cool comment I have very vivid dreams while sleeping and a big imagination ❤️
Re: Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 00:42am
here's a video for you dearest Visions I like it...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q6g6ryLYoQ0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q6g6ryLYoQ0
Re: Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 00:46am
Cool video. Gothic, sexual, dark, hot imagery that I dig a lot. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 2:44am
Re. Devil
The last two lines were killer perfect.
I feel like I can feel the dark passion pouring out of you.
You amaze! 🖤
I feel like I can feel the dark passion pouring out of you.
You amaze! 🖤
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12th Feb 2024 11:31pm
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12th Feb 2024 12:57pm
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12th Feb 2024 5:24pm
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12th Feb 2024 11:32pm
Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 11:41pm
WOW! And you call this... seduction? Just sayin' :-/ There's a purity here that I can't quite put my finger on. Still felt blown away by it all, crimsin. :-)
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Re: Re. Devil
12th Feb 2024 11:44pm
hello dearest Billy I've experienced an otherworldly type of sex it's quite something thank you my friend 💕
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12th Feb 2024 11:45pm
Re. Devil
18th Feb 2024 00:52am
The right off the bat in those opening lines we feel the raw, lustful energy.
Great work.
Great work.
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18th Feb 2024 00:54am