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The Paths of Sin
The paths of sin
were not lonely.
Even though I knew
the one I embraced
belonged to another,
in that wonderful
moment of his coming,
his full commitment
to our oneness
brought a mystical
aura that lasted into
those glowing moments
afterward when whispers
need have no meaning.
were not lonely.
Even though I knew
the one I embraced
belonged to another,
in that wonderful
moment of his coming,
his full commitment
to our oneness
brought a mystical
aura that lasted into
those glowing moments
afterward when whispers
need have no meaning.
Published 7th Feb 2024
Author's Note
Just remembering indiscretions from my past. I'm surprised not to feel more regret. Sometimes there's a badness in me that I don't understand. Photo is edited from an earlier time.
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7th Feb 2024 4:00pm
Beautifully executed. Choice of words flow smoothly. Can feel your emotions through this.
7th Feb 2024 4:04pm
Perhaps it’s not living fully in the present moment that is the sin, but the regret.
Nicely penned.🙏
Nicely penned.🙏
7th Feb 2024 5:25pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
7th Feb 2024 5:37pm
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So often people are misguided into sin (or misbehaviour generally) by the company in which they did them, for example like the young person who joins in with a robbery or vandalism as part of a gang they may have found belonging hanging round. Nothing misleads like wrong company leading to wrong acts..
I think girls get mentally and emotionally sabotaged by invalid church "psychology" way, way more than boys do, and the cornerstone of that bad psychology is the obsolete concept of sin.
