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Rose...Victim of silent rejection..!
It remain quiet
after being
abandoned
by someone
I have seen it
becoming the
beauty of someone's hair
becoming
a witness of love
shivering in the sheets
in quiet nights
and buried in the book
n yaaa I have seen it
fall in love with words
n I have seen the words
cry when that rose
is thrown away from the book...
Published 7th Feb 2024
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7th Feb 2024 11:40am
7th Feb 2024 11:43am
Hello Dimpy. The one thing I like about your writing is that you don't just splatter words on the page, you add emotion to each poem, whether erotic, or poems like this. You've given the rose qualities that equal aspects of human character like love, rejection, abandonement, sorrow and loneliness.
I recall when my mother died I had to go through some of her old things from a box. In between the pages of an old book was a faded rose. When I saw the picture you've added it immediately reminded me of that.
It's always a happy moment to see a new poem from you, Dimpy.
I love this my pretty friend. :)
I recall when my mother died I had to go through some of her old things from a box. In between the pages of an old book was a faded rose. When I saw the picture you've added it immediately reminded me of that.
It's always a happy moment to see a new poem from you, Dimpy.
I love this my pretty friend. :)
7th Feb 2024 3:44pm
Hey Tim
I wholeheartedly appreciate your response... I felt very happy that you remembered your mother through my poem n yaaa thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading my words so deeply and adding them in your RL...
I wholeheartedly appreciate your response... I felt very happy that you remembered your mother through my poem n yaaa thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading my words so deeply and adding them in your RL...
7th Feb 2024 5:31pm
7th Feb 2024 5:33pm
7th Feb 2024 6:13pm
A relic of love preserved in the pages.
Brings to mind a true story that an archivist at Canterbury Cathedral in England in the middle of the 20th century found a rose that had been undisturbed amidst the pages of a document since the 16th century (1500s). As that century was the reign of the Tudor dynasty in England and the red/white rose was their symbol, it could be described as a specimen of a once live Tudor rose.
Brings to mind a true story that an archivist at Canterbury Cathedral in England in the middle of the 20th century found a rose that had been undisturbed amidst the pages of a document since the 16th century (1500s). As that century was the reign of the Tudor dynasty in England and the red/white rose was their symbol, it could be described as a specimen of a once live Tudor rose.
9th Feb 2024 00:52am
I don't know about the history..but from what you said I think my decision to write about rose was not wrong.. Thank you SS... N sorry for delay in reply...
9th Feb 2024 2:33am
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9th Feb 2024 12:12pm
9th Feb 2024 2:01pm
Hey artist
It's a matter of great pride for me to hear this from you.. I wanted that my words should touch the heart of my readers.. N It is my good fortune that my words touched you... I appreciate❤
It's a matter of great pride for me to hear this from you.. I wanted that my words should touch the heart of my readers.. N It is my good fortune that my words touched you... I appreciate❤
13th Feb 2024 2:19am
Very good, Dimpy. This is truly poetic with your words and the visions that you created.
Wonderful write.
Wonderful write.
13th Feb 2024 2:55am
Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 3:30pm
The mementos saved between pages take on a life all their own. Beautiful
