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Artificial Order Of Things

Feeling the hammer knocking  
on an artificial order of things
in dreams, a short-term in life
of empty moments
abandoning the terrain  
waiting on the predictable  
but the mind is working
when it's no longer pertinent
feeling the hammer knocking
Written by adagio
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Author's Note
Many times, the hammer is knocking but one may have it tuned out...until.
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