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Moving Into A New Place With Discussing It First
"All we need to do
now is move ourselves in." was
what Dad said before
we took one look at the place
and ask "What did we do wrong?"
now is move ourselves in." was
what Dad said before
we took one look at the place
and ask "What did we do wrong?"
Published 4th Feb 2024
Author's Note
This tanka poem is about one parent moving his whole family into a new residence without talking with them about it first.
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if i did this right, url takes you to youtube & “the ugliest house on the block” by beth hart
If it's not one thing, it's another
Flies buzzing around big ass huts
Not just screaming for my supper
I live in the ugliest house on the block…
i think you will enjoy the listen. once through the whole song, it could— & should—be obvious life could be worse than where your dad went wrong…😁
if i did this right, url takes you to youtube & “the ugliest house on the block” by beth hart
If it's not one thing, it's another
Flies buzzing around big ass huts
Not just screaming for my supper
I live in the ugliest house on the block…
i think you will enjoy the listen. once through the whole song, it could— & should—be obvious life could be worse than where your dad went wrong…😁
5th Feb 2024 10:43am
