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used
passed from one
to another,
a gift
of torment,
she hid away
her emotions,
drugging
her memories
so she can survive,
returning
to the scene
of the crime,
she is bled
as society
passes judgement
on her,
degrading her,
she loses her will
to keep fighting,
her desire to survive.
to another,
a gift
of torment,
she hid away
her emotions,
drugging
her memories
so she can survive,
returning
to the scene
of the crime,
she is bled
as society
passes judgement
on her,
degrading her,
she loses her will
to keep fighting,
her desire to survive.
Published 30th Jan 2024
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30th Jan 2024 5:40am
30th Jan 2024 5:56am
30th Jan 2024 7:40am
Dear J,
Intense and insightful piece. Heartbreaking reality within these stanzas. Difficult subject on which to comment, great writing as always. H🌷
Intense and insightful piece. Heartbreaking reality within these stanzas. Difficult subject on which to comment, great writing as always. H🌷
30th Jan 2024 8:02am
30th Jan 2024 12:11pm
30th Jan 2024 12:16pm
Anonymous
30th Jan 2024 1:00pm
All too common in this world we live in. Beautifully & compassionately written
30th Jan 2024 7:22pm
2nd Feb 2024 10:05am
Helllo, how are you man... Interestin read... was glad to see how she lost the will to survive, an was startin to give up, that part was good... that is real, & therin the power of this read... Have you considered writiin this again in her first person narrative... take good care: wolf
