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Observation
When quiet despair stretches
from one end of the universe to the other
there is only one thing to do
look above
for even the universe is finite
and worlds exist beyond this one
from one end of the universe to the other
there is only one thing to do
look above
for even the universe is finite
and worlds exist beyond this one
Published 22nd Jan 2024
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22nd Jan 2024 5:52pm
It's been a while! Hope you are well!
I love the infinite message of this - "In my Father's house are many mansions. . .". Goodness knows where we'll go!
I love the infinite message of this - "In my Father's house are many mansions. . .". Goodness knows where we'll go!
29th Jan 2024 11:40pm
Thank you for the lovely critique - it is so good to see you again!
Things since 2023 have been a storm of major events and not many positive ones. However, things are settling somewhat into a new pattern and I am hoping to return here more often.
Things since 2023 have been a storm of major events and not many positive ones. However, things are settling somewhat into a new pattern and I am hoping to return here more often.
22nd Feb 2024 3:42pm
16th Dec 2024 3:00am
Sometimes not too many words say it all and leave a lasting impression. You said a great deal so simply. It made an impression on me. Good write.
lisa777
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