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I Made Fire

Yesterday, I ignited a flame,  
In the woods where I had lost my way.  
The chill of the hike didn't cause me distress,  
A touch of rust, not worried, I must confess.  
   
Awaiting rescue from the wild I braved,  
The fire's warmth sparked thoughts, and I craved  
To glimpse prehistoric life's ancient lore,  
Imagining the first touch, what it held in store.  
   
Picture the awe of mortal mankind's first fire,  
From peril to power, a transformative desire.  
In the dance of flames, nature harnessed and tamed,  
A force benevolent, not to be blamed.  
   
Wrapped in warmth, I whispered, "I made fire,"  
A magician's delight, fulfilling my deepest desire.  
Human existence, fragile amidst nature's raw might,  
Beneath modern layers, our primal core takes flight.
Written by PleasingDragon
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Author's Note
"I Made Fire" captures a fleeting yet powerful moment in the woods, where the act of kindling fire sparks reflections on our primal connection to nature. Beyond the physical warmth, the poem explores the timeless allure and transformative essence of fire. It invites readers to witness a simple yet profound act, delving into the contrast between the ancient forces that shaped us and the contemporary world we navigate. In essence, the poem is an ode to the enduring dance between humanity and the elemental forces that define our existence.
In "I Made Fire," the poetic journey gains an added layer with a nod to the iconic scene from the movie "Cast Away." Much like Tom Hanks' character, the speaker experiences the exhilaration of making fire in the woods.
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