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Fallen
Fallen, deep in my darkness...
But what if it's the best of me?
the part that connects
with the hurts of the world
On the other side I sense
the oneness that eludes me
Here in coolness of shadows
I can feel my own warmth
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Another one from I-know-not-when
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Re. Fallen
4th Jan 2024 5:06pm
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5th Jan 2024 00:12am
Re. Fallen
4th Jan 2024 7:39pm
We often find our deepest selves when in the darkness. That's how we nurture that part of ourselves & grow. I love the line "But what if it's the best of me?" It really pulls it in tightly
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Re: Re. Fallen
5th Jan 2024 00:13am
Many thanks. Sometimes when our own light is dim, we have to get into the dark to see it...
❤️k
❤️k
Re. Fallen
4th Jan 2024 11:58pm
There's an awful lot in this poem; I like it very much. Every experience contains vital information, somehow for our ultimate benefit - (deciphering it is another story). Epiphany moments though don't always have to come from painful experiences; yet strangely, maybe peversely, they often seem to be the ones that trigger the stronger 'Aha!' moments. All the best for 2024, Josh.
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Re: Re. Fallen
5th Jan 2024 00:18am
Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like it! I found this in a book from several years ago. (For all I know I might have already published it with a different title!) But it feels relevant, as I've just had a rather painful learning experience. Oh well, as you said... for ultimate benefit, I hope!
Cheers & happy new year,
❤️k
Cheers & happy new year,
❤️k
Re. Fallen
7th Jan 2024 4:59am
Dearest, K
This is such a profound question,
"But what if it's the best of me?
the part that connects
with the hurts of the world"
Personally you've brought me much joy and healing through your beautiful poetry and music💞
Bravissima❣
This is such a profound question,
"But what if it's the best of me?
the part that connects
with the hurts of the world"
Personally you've brought me much joy and healing through your beautiful poetry and music💞
Bravissima❣
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Re: Re. Fallen
14th Jan 2024 11:50am
Thank you, GW, you're very kind!
There are always things to be learned in the dark.
❤️k
There are always things to be learned in the dark.
❤️k
Re. Fallen
8th Jan 2024 4:52pm
Reaching into the subconscious, asking the questions and bringing balance...wonderful, powerful poetry.
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14th Jan 2024 11:51am
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14th Jan 2024 11:51am
Re. Fallen
14th Jan 2024 2:56am
Tho I know myself the comfort of a self-cave, its too close to being a self burial as well. You've too much light to give out, to remain too deep in the dim.
Get out of yourself and go thrive. It's what you're good at! We've seen it.
Get out of yourself and go thrive. It's what you're good at! We've seen it.
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14th Jan 2024 11:53am
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Re. Fallen
4th Feb 2024 6:01pm
I've been able to avoid the darkness for a little while, yet I know it's my shadow being I had it for so long. Some people mix in good with it. They find a way to comingle with it and find creativity. Whatever makes your boat float, I guess. :)
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