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a song for the day. a song for the night
time
neither friend
nor foe
time is the orchestra
accompanying our
concerto we play
through
life
moving like water
flowing downstream
gaining momentum
through the
force of
life
billions upon billions
of lives
each looking
searching
desperately holding
on by the thinnest
of threads to;
an improbable
dream
a wasted
hope
an unfulfilled want
arriving like a blind
savior
the avalanche of
humanity
reaching out for
the stars
only to find
darkness
but yet,
we continue
on
singing a song
for the day
a song for the
night
the most beautiful
song known to
God
Published 30th Dec 2023
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31st Dec 2023 6:23am
Looking at the world and understanding life in a more after a certain number of years (so as to not get lost in the nostalgia of it all) is a more pragmatic, productive approach. We live, we cried, we loved and hopefully we laughed somewhere in between.
31st Dec 2023 7:17am
Yes indeed. All that you have listed, and more.
Thank you, wally.
Happy new year to you and yours.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, wally.
Happy new year to you and yours.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
31st Dec 2023 7:01am
Dear BK,
I loved the touching reflection in this piece and the use of music as a metaphor. The closing line is a lovely homage to one’s higher power as it were and very inspiring. Happy New Year dear one. H🌷
I loved the touching reflection in this piece and the use of music as a metaphor. The closing line is a lovely homage to one’s higher power as it were and very inspiring. Happy New Year dear one. H🌷
31st Dec 2023 7:18am
Very much appreciated, my dear Honoria.
Happy new year to you and yours.
hugs, love,
buddhakitty.
Happy new year to you and yours.
hugs, love,
buddhakitty.
31st Dec 2023 7:19am
Very much appreciated, my dear Honoria.
Happy new year to you and yours.
hugs, love,
buddhakitty.
Happy new year to you and yours.
hugs, love,
buddhakitty.
31st Dec 2023 3:39pm
Treating night and day, the ups and downs, with equanimity, with the same 'song' sounds to me like a powerful way forward. All the best for a better 2024, Josh.
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