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Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone ...
Connecting but not locked in
A loner moves in between the lines
It takes courage to live outside the box
Comforted though by bits of human engagement
Dylan said it best
"To live outside the law you must be honest"
Somehow those words ring true for this cowboy
Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone
A lone light leading to the halal cart
Chicken over rice in a whirlwind of scent
Maybe it's the spices and just enough conversation
Or just maybe, it's something else .....
A loner moves in between the lines
It takes courage to live outside the box
Comforted though by bits of human engagement
Dylan said it best
"To live outside the law you must be honest"
Somehow those words ring true for this cowboy
Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone
A lone light leading to the halal cart
Chicken over rice in a whirlwind of scent
Maybe it's the spices and just enough conversation
Or just maybe, it's something else .....
Written by
PoetSpeak
Published 28th Dec 2023
| Edited 2nd Jan 2024
Author's Note
2017 poem originally titled
"Between Two Worlds"
"Between Two Worlds"
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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reading list entries 5
comments 19
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Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 2:53pm
Where the fuck have you been hiding this?!
This is beautiful. The quiet undertones and the vignettes with a Dylan soundtrack create a rain-city-street, an urban blaze of glory that really resonates.
The food cart… the way you used sight and smell to articulate loneliness was lovely.
Big like.
This is beautiful. The quiet undertones and the vignettes with a Dylan soundtrack create a rain-city-street, an urban blaze of glory that really resonates.
The food cart… the way you used sight and smell to articulate loneliness was lovely.
Big like.
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Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 3:16pm
I've posted close to 2000 poems under the Poetspeak brand. Some bear repeating...
This was a favorite but I couldn't remember the title. Found it this morning while looking for something else...
Thanks Betty !
Appreciate
This was a favorite but I couldn't remember the title. Found it this morning while looking for something else...
Thanks Betty !
Appreciate
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 3:57pm
Chicken over rice in a whirlwind of scent BOOM! You slap the ask and this stuff comes out You have great game
Bat
Bat
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Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 4:42pm
I'm a road salesman. I find myself in strange deserted locations sometimes with nothing but a factory and a Halal cart close by. Gotta be mighty grateful for that cart. The dude knows me and knows I like a piece of grilled pita on the side. No charge. That's a story that needed to be written.
Thanks Bat !
Thanks Bat !
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 7:23pm
Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 8:54pm
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 9:07pm
Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 10:15pm
Trying to pick my very best.
You're praise, BIG LIKE and RL mean a lot to me !!
Thank You A
You're praise, BIG LIKE and RL mean a lot to me !!
Thank You A
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 10:15pm
Dear PS,
This is like the scene in a movie where the camera pulls up and the main character is the only focus amidst the crowded street to capture a realization. So glad you found this to repost and shed the light. Happy New Year mayor cowboy 😊🤠🏆
H🌷
This is like the scene in a movie where the camera pulls up and the main character is the only focus amidst the crowded street to capture a realization. So glad you found this to repost and shed the light. Happy New Year mayor cowboy 😊🤠🏆
H🌷
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Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
28th Dec 2023 10:18pm
Dear H,
I've got a bunch that I'll be re-introducing.
2000 poems is a lot of wood as we say in my trade.
I appreciate your praise more than you'll ever know. You my sweet poet are an ICON here.
Thank you
😍🤠❤💯
I've got a bunch that I'll be re-introducing.
2000 poems is a lot of wood as we say in my trade.
I appreciate your praise more than you'll ever know. You my sweet poet are an ICON here.
Thank you
😍🤠❤💯
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
29th Dec 2023 00:49am
Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
29th Dec 2023 00:51am
Breaking out the champagne of my poems
Stay tuned beautiful one ....
Thank you always for your support
💌❤💌
Stay tuned beautiful one ....
Thank you always for your support
💌❤💌
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
29th Dec 2023 5:27pm
Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
29th Dec 2023 7:04pm
Thank you so much Willow
I'm glad I found it again
Its gotten some great comments
Stay tuned !!
I'm glad I found it again
Its gotten some great comments
Stay tuned !!
Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
10th Jan 2024 00:11am
Thank you for the POM nomination. It's been a long time on getting one of those.
I'm really thrilled Willow
Thank you ❤
I'm really thrilled Willow
Thank you ❤
Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
31st Dec 2023 6:11am
"A loner moves in between the lines"
liked this line, pretty awesome.
BL brother.
liked this line, pretty awesome.
BL brother.
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Re: Re. Best of Poetspeak.... Loner
31st Dec 2023 12:45pm
Re. Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone ...
19th Jan 2024 4:35am
Re: Re. Dark streets on the edge of the industrial zone ...
19th Jan 2024 12:31pm
Drawn from truth
These carts thrive in dark corners of the working class.
Damn good plate of food for not a lot of green.
When you need sustenance, a smile and a little recognition this is where I slide into line..
Many thanks for tye read and RL Cipher.
You are appreciated.
These carts thrive in dark corners of the working class.
Damn good plate of food for not a lot of green.
When you need sustenance, a smile and a little recognition this is where I slide into line..
Many thanks for tye read and RL Cipher.
You are appreciated.