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One Too Many
I rather see you burn
then speak another day
you piss away my empathy
hope is lost in your travesty
time flys by
and into the dump
guess what I'm trying to say is
fuckers like you are one too many
don't blame me
I'm just the cynic
the mother fucking critic
unpopular opinion
but I also don't like your politics
and the curse is I'm cursed with
knowing you're still breathing
makes me want to get sick and die
if only to be somewhere you're not
friends say just let it go
find inner peace
hate is a poison
none of that I disagree with
still I'd like to take a bat to your head
my car over your corpse
torch you down to ashes
then piss all over them
it's really hard to convince the world
what a good person I am
after such a fucked up statement
but honesty is what I believe
I cannot tell a lie
truth is I would sport the biggest smile
if only I could open up the news paper
see your name one last time
with such kind words in each line
which of course are all fucking lies
then speak another day
you piss away my empathy
hope is lost in your travesty
time flys by
and into the dump
guess what I'm trying to say is
fuckers like you are one too many
don't blame me
I'm just the cynic
the mother fucking critic
unpopular opinion
but I also don't like your politics
and the curse is I'm cursed with
knowing you're still breathing
makes me want to get sick and die
if only to be somewhere you're not
friends say just let it go
find inner peace
hate is a poison
none of that I disagree with
still I'd like to take a bat to your head
my car over your corpse
torch you down to ashes
then piss all over them
it's really hard to convince the world
what a good person I am
after such a fucked up statement
but honesty is what I believe
I cannot tell a lie
truth is I would sport the biggest smile
if only I could open up the news paper
see your name one last time
with such kind words in each line
which of course are all fucking lies
Published 17th Dec 2023
Author's Note
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18th Dec 2023 00:34am
I suspect maybe you might be a kind & gentle person in real life..? But sometimes this shit just has to go somewhere...
Love the music selection. 👍
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Love the music selection. 👍
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Haha. Yes, I'm actually quite chill. But I need to vent in my own ways. My poetry lets me do that. Also would add my poetry isn't always what it seems, much like song writing in away.
Glad you like the song. I love anything that is raw and such a FU. That stuff inspires me.
Glad you like the song. I love anything that is raw and such a FU. That stuff inspires me.
27th Dec 2023 4:41pm
Hate is a poison, but poetry is a solid outlet. Wicked piece of expression DC.
LJ
LJ
23rd Jan 2024 5:33pm
