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Cage Striped Heart
My world’s so far away
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise steel gate
Free of hate and liars
Behind razor barbed wire
Everything was so still
There was nothing until
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Movement into music
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Wondering where you are
Phasing across the ocean
Contemplation into motion
Playing my cage striped heart
Like a harp, knowing you’ll hear me
Living in a parallel home
I’m hoping you’ll stay
Always on my asylum mind
How you move me even when
We’re so far apart
Locked down in a different town
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Wondering where you are
And what you’re doing
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Phasing through concrete
Playing my heart out
Knowing you’ll hear me
Cause no one else sounds like me
I’ve got nothing but time
But I don’t want to wait
Your voice unlocks my
Paradise steel gate
Free of hate and liars
Behind razor barbed wire
Everything was so still
There was nothing until
Penitentiary art
Penitentiary art
Movement into music
Strumming bars on
My Cage Striped Heart
Wondering where you are
Phasing across the ocean
Contemplation into motion
Playing my cage striped heart
Like a harp, knowing you’ll hear me
Published 7th Dec 2023
Author's Note
I had a great Thanksgiving break:) Went to see the ocean, shopped a little and
decorated a Christmas Tree at Mark's place.
I haven't written any lyrics in a while.
Thought I'd give it a try.
Hope you enjoy:)
decorated a Christmas Tree at Mark's place.
I haven't written any lyrics in a while.
Thought I'd give it a try.
Hope you enjoy:)
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7th Dec 2023 00:25am
I'm happy you enjoyed your Holiday beautiful Adelphina this is wonderful 💕
7th Dec 2023 00:32am
Thank you so much.
It was time to come home and well... I miss him:(
Glad you enjoyed my little spill:)
It was time to come home and well... I miss him:(
Glad you enjoyed my little spill:)
7th Dec 2023 00:39am
This sure plays like a harp... well, it reads like one anyway, Adelphina. Here's another prison-of-sorts music link in a kinda romantic way. Your 'Cage Striped Heart' poem reminded me of it. https://youtu.be/_W2jONIjrM0
7th Dec 2023 00:45am
Hey Billy!
Thanks for your snaps on this.
I'm going to check it out now.
You got me curious. haha
Have a great evening amigo:)
Thanks for your snaps on this.
I'm going to check it out now.
You got me curious. haha
Have a great evening amigo:)
7th Dec 2023 00:49am
OMG! I'm a huge Bryan Adams fan. hahah
Too funny. I haven't heard this one so thank you for that.
Too funny. I haven't heard this one so thank you for that.
7th Dec 2023 00:51am
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9th Dec 2023 1:13am
Hi Tim!
Thank you so much:)
I was listening to this song.
d4dv - Romantic Homicide
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKL3TceSxvk
Just the opening. It sounds so infinite. I changed the
subject matter since it's about how love dies. LOL
The guitar kept playing over and over in my head so
I used it to write these lyrics. hahah
Glad to see you stopping by!
It's always nice to hear from you:)
Thank you so much:)
I was listening to this song.
d4dv - Romantic Homicide
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKL3TceSxvk
Just the opening. It sounds so infinite. I changed the
subject matter since it's about how love dies. LOL
The guitar kept playing over and over in my head so
I used it to write these lyrics. hahah
Glad to see you stopping by!
It's always nice to hear from you:)
7th Dec 2023 4:09am
9th Dec 2023 1:16am
Hi PS
Thanks for that. I just kept hearing the chorus in my head.
Had to write it down before it flowed away:)
Glad I caught it!
Thanks for the hat nod amigo!
Thanks for that. I just kept hearing the chorus in my head.
Had to write it down before it flowed away:)
Glad I caught it!
Thanks for the hat nod amigo!
7th Dec 2023 1:33pm
9th Dec 2023 1:18am
Hi Faith!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Made my evening
reading your comment and seeing you on my page:)
Thanks for the read!
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Made my evening
reading your comment and seeing you on my page:)
Thanks for the read!
Anonymous
7th Dec 2023 1:50pm
The longing is felt in every clever line. Hopefully you'll see him again soon
9th Dec 2023 1:22am
Hi C,
Thanks for your snaps on my lines. I always try to make it
interesting and different:)
I talk to him all the time.
We're never too far apart even miles away:)
Thanks for your snaps on my lines. I always try to make it
interesting and different:)
I talk to him all the time.
We're never too far apart even miles away:)
7th Dec 2023 4:10pm
Hi Delphi, I'm glad you're still writing. Your lyrics really deserve music, I'll try to come up with something over Christmas. It's really nice. :-*
9th Dec 2023 1:28am
Hi IR
Of course I'm still writing. Just super busy and trying to squeeze it in
when I can. Thank you so much for your snaps on this!!!
Can't wait to hear what you come up with amigo!!
Enjoy your Christmas!!
Thanks for stopping by:)
Of course I'm still writing. Just super busy and trying to squeeze it in
when I can. Thank you so much for your snaps on this!!!
Can't wait to hear what you come up with amigo!!
Enjoy your Christmas!!
Thanks for stopping by:)
11th Dec 2023 7:44pm
Thank you honey, I'm very glad that I have good friends to support me. I will make music after the new year, there is no time for that. But I will remember you very fondly. Merry Christmas beautiful friend. :-*
7th Dec 2023 5:04pm
You enjoy the holidays with your boyfriend. Hope you enjoyed the ride. Keep on writing.
9th Dec 2023 1:31am
Hi Cisco!
I had a great time.
He spoils me:)
Hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving!
I had a great time.
He spoils me:)
Hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving!
7th Dec 2023 8:00pm
Absence does one of two things: it extinguishes the weak and inflames the strong. I do believe you are the latter. Enjoyed the lyrics very much and wishing you continued strength on love's journey.
9th Dec 2023 1:39am
Hi Ahavati:)
Thank you so much for the encouraging comment. It made me
smile and sit up a little straighter while typing this reply:)
He's so attentive and sweet. It was a wonderful trip.
Thanks for the best wishes and your snaps on my lyrics.
Means the world.
Thank you so much for the encouraging comment. It made me
smile and sit up a little straighter while typing this reply:)
He's so attentive and sweet. It was a wonderful trip.
Thanks for the best wishes and your snaps on my lyrics.
Means the world.
8th Dec 2023 2:23am
Why is it that a plane descending is so uplifting, and then a plane ascending leaves me downtrodden? Because you're on it.
I miss you too.
We have what's important in common, because we're DUPlicates!
This is a beautiful write, my love. I feel it, big-time. The cleverness within the sense of longing is not enough to hide the feelings. Because we're coping the same.
Every day with you is a holiday. The waits are always worth it.
I miss you too.
We have what's important in common, because we're DUPlicates!
This is a beautiful write, my love. I feel it, big-time. The cleverness within the sense of longing is not enough to hide the feelings. Because we're coping the same.
Every day with you is a holiday. The waits are always worth it.
Hey Big Sexy!!!!!
OMG!!
DUPlicates is brilliant. hahaha
I'll be back before you know it and don't roll your eyes at that.
It will be soon. The New Year is coming and I'm looking forward to it.
Hang in there big guy:)
Just like me!
Yes, It feels like I'm in lockdown cause I can't hug you
when I want;(
But soon I will - we both have something to look forward to!!
I always get that excited feeling in the shuttle to you at the airport.
It feels like a mini subway. hahaha
It's exhilarating!
Smooches!!
OMG!!
DUPlicates is brilliant. hahaha
I'll be back before you know it and don't roll your eyes at that.
It will be soon. The New Year is coming and I'm looking forward to it.
Hang in there big guy:)
Just like me!
Yes, It feels like I'm in lockdown cause I can't hug you
when I want;(
But soon I will - we both have something to look forward to!!
I always get that excited feeling in the shuttle to you at the airport.
It feels like a mini subway. hahaha
It's exhilarating!
Smooches!!
8th Dec 2023 10:08pm
The distance is deeply felt in this one. The together moments must be amazing to inspire such beautiful missing you poetry. Hopefully you won't be apart too long!
9th Dec 2023 1:54am
Hi Willow!!
We do live far apart but when we see each other it's like no time
has passed. We pick up right where we left off.
But when we are apart - I do miss him:)
He's my woosah.
All good things come in time - gotta remember that when it gets
frustrating.
Thanks for stopping by for a read:)
We do live far apart but when we see each other it's like no time
has passed. We pick up right where we left off.
But when we are apart - I do miss him:)
He's my woosah.
All good things come in time - gotta remember that when it gets
frustrating.
Thanks for stopping by for a read:)
9th Dec 2023 3:17am
You know lots of people think that long distance relationships aren't cool or are destined to fail. We can call this a lie as big as the sun overhead. We know several people whose relationship started long distance, now either their better half lives here or they have moved there. We have people at work that are in long distance relations or they have moved closer. The point is to take your times and build that grain into a pearl. Distance really is nothing but space and time, and both can be overcome with that special love and trust. We now possess the ability to communicate all over space and time, tight piece Lady
13th Dec 2023 1:25am
Hey Meme:)
Thanks for the encouraging words amigo:)
It's not easy but we make it work. The future is a great
place to focus my energy and writing. Makes time pass
easier.
My cousin met her husband online. They are still together to this
day. You just gotta be willing to put yourself out there and take a chance,
thanks for stopping by!!
Thanks for the encouraging words amigo:)
It's not easy but we make it work. The future is a great
place to focus my energy and writing. Makes time pass
easier.
My cousin met her husband online. They are still together to this
day. You just gotta be willing to put yourself out there and take a chance,
thanks for stopping by!!
17th Dec 2023 9:50am
Thoroughly enjoyed. Asylum mind.. great line.
My long distance love and I put the tree up at my house a couple of weeks back 😊
LJ
My long distance love and I put the tree up at my house a couple of weeks back 😊
LJ
18th Dec 2023 1:01am
Hi LJ!
Thanks - I went back and forth on whether to put asylum in or not.
Glad I kept in:)
I was so excited. We went to Hobby Lobby and got Christmas stuff. It was all 50 percent off!!
I'm wishing you nothing but the best for the holidays and New Year chica!!
Live and Love amiga!!!
Thanks for stopping by:)
Thanks - I went back and forth on whether to put asylum in or not.
Glad I kept in:)
I was so excited. We went to Hobby Lobby and got Christmas stuff. It was all 50 percent off!!
I'm wishing you nothing but the best for the holidays and New Year chica!!
Live and Love amiga!!!
Thanks for stopping by:)
