Deliverance Liberation

hello dearest Connotation this is really well written
I like the message here 💕

Thanks for checking it out, and your words of encouragement.

I like that - deliverance liberation and what it means.
The poem unfolds with such skilled execution of words. I think you did an excellent job conveying your message.
I think I need more schooling when I read your writing, 😆 haha

Rhyming words naturally creates a broader association of vocabulary.  Some would say it limits, I think it challenges.  Yeah, it never hurts to keep learning new words, and like we've discussed before, strategizing and compiling a list, and going about actively brainstorming before you write.  It can actually yield a better product.  I guess it's just being prepared.  Thanks for checking it out.  Your commentary is appreciated.

I do research different words I choose for poems sometimes. I'm always highly interested in broadening my vocabulary. I do see rhyme as a challenge as well.

Yeah, I've noticed you're rhyming more in your works.  You have a pretty good feel for it.  A lot of it is syllable stress.  If you can sit down and make a list of words with similar syllable stresses, and the same number of syllables, it all can fall into order.  You have to be careful with secondary syllables and so forth, because they can still throw off the scheme, but if you rhyme the words in/TRIN/sic and re/MIS/ion, you see the 2nd syllable is the same in emphasis/stress, as well as pronunciation (the I sound), as well as they're both 3 syllables, and the 1st and 3rd syllables have similar pronunciation.  You kind of have to use slant rhyming a bit too.  You can do all kinds of things with rhyming - it really comes down to breaking it down in technicality.  It's a good way to learn new words too, at least, that's how I've learned a lot of the words I have - through rhyming words.  Anyway, yeah, hope this makes sense.  You're really getting better as a writer.  If you can start rhyming 3 and 4 syllable words, as well as the technicality in itself (like more than one word adding to 3 and 4 syllables), you'll be on your way to rhyming.  Always remember, keep the stress and emphasis on the same syllable of the rhyming words!

Yeah, and simply researching words, if they don't rhyme, is helpful too.  A thesaurus is quite handy, heh.  There is so much that can go into choosing the right words - aesthetic, definition, metaphor, technicality, regulating attention, emotion, etc.  Some words just work better in some cases.  Anyway, you probably know all of that.

Thanks for breaking all that down, your rhyming is impeccable. I strive to keep pushing my limits. Thanks for your encouragement.