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give voice to my soul..
The new gentle cool breeze of the morning...the humming light blue ocean water...the golden ray kissing my cheeks and brushes my lips through the half-open window...
Like a new love coming from the other side of the mountain... new promise...the hope of something new...a magic that is about to happen… A new moan and stretch…
Like a new ointment is being applied for the treatment of wounds.. getting nutrition.. getting protection.. too open... i have nothing to hide within this sun shine...
My pale skin and my room want to be bathed in this white fairer shade of light..... in this new air...in new hope..in new comfort... wrap me up.. drown me.. don't let me go..make me polished and beautiful..give me power..set fire to this ice
Published 21st Nov 2023
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2023 5:33pm
Such a beautiful empowering poem
21st Nov 2023 5:36pm
21st Nov 2023 11:52pm
We agree with the comments above, this is a great piece. Really tight writing Lady
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