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LEFT HERE ALL ALONE
Emptying emotions and thought
Memories of us are left to rot Completely aware yet unaware
We're perfectly round like a square
Two puzzle pieces still incomplete
Yet we put each other on our feet
Our hearts just lay here to waste
We both reacted in a bitter haste
We both can no longer find
What is that was left behind
Now we're at complete loss
Each paying the ultimate cost
Its a never ending sad pain
Coursing through our brain
Everything we had, now gone
Feeling bad, but time to move on
We're each now left here all alone
Memories of us are left to rot Completely aware yet unaware
We're perfectly round like a square
Two puzzle pieces still incomplete
Yet we put each other on our feet
Our hearts just lay here to waste
We both reacted in a bitter haste
We both can no longer find
What is that was left behind
Now we're at complete loss
Each paying the ultimate cost
Its a never ending sad pain
Coursing through our brain
Everything we had, now gone
Feeling bad, but time to move on
We're each now left here all alone
Published 14th Nov 2023
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14th Nov 2023 3:56am
The bittersweet line, 'We're perfectly round like a square.' was quite hard-hitting.
14th Nov 2023 4:03am
Ahhh..sorry for the discomfort, but maybe there's a reason!? And you need to address it!? Tysvm for your continued visits, comments and support 🥰❤💯🫂
14th Nov 2023 4:05am
14th Nov 2023 4:09am
Lol..I know for certain there's a reason..but, up to you what you about it 🥰❤💯🫂
14th Nov 2023 4:12am
Lol, I thought you were talking about yourself in the poem, rather than me. ;-)
14th Nov 2023 4:23am
Ah..my bad..oh I realize there is still much more healing to do, and revaluation and discovery to be had. I am on my way at least-- blinders are coming off for longer periods of time each day. No matter what happens, I will not ever forget him nor stop loving him. I have grown since meeting him and spending a lot of my lifetime thus far in a on and off relationship with him. That's not easy to forget or dismiss. (my opinion) But, at least I am now moving forward even without him. 🥰❤💯🫂
14th Nov 2023 4:28am
Pleased to hear it. I have no one to move on with yet but when I do, did you like that? (when) I'll probably be shouting it from the rooftops. I'm too cool to be single, don't you think? You do not have to answer that, btw! Lol. ;-)
14th Nov 2023 5:24am
Lol..I am too kewl to be single too..yet I enjoy my solitude for the most part..🥰❤💯🫂
14th Nov 2023 5:04am
Dear P,
“We're perfectly round like a square” great line. I totally appreciated the evolution of this poem. The morphing of two people in a relationship has so many twists and turns and I like your representation of that. Wonderfully written. H🌷
“We're perfectly round like a square” great line. I totally appreciated the evolution of this poem. The morphing of two people in a relationship has so many twists and turns and I like your representation of that. Wonderfully written. H🌷
14th Nov 2023 5:22am
Tysvm for you visit and comment..long time no see or speak..how you been?! 🥰❤💯🫂
14th Nov 2023 12:13pm
So hard when the pieces don't fit. Very well expressed here. It takes the heart time to catch up to reality, it seems. And it hurts
14th Nov 2023 2:42pm
YES..VERY much so..especially when you have trauma issues to begin with
.most certainly when you have abandoned issues..but,.if you are jpnest with yourself as you heal..you discover more who you truly are beneath all that..tysvm again for your comments, visit and support..btw, I have several on this site in different genres..help yourself to have a look..You'll read about what this love was like when it actually was alive and living and beautiful, etc...🥰🫂❤💯
.most certainly when you have abandoned issues..but,.if you are jpnest with yourself as you heal..you discover more who you truly are beneath all that..tysvm again for your comments, visit and support..btw, I have several on this site in different genres..help yourself to have a look..You'll read about what this love was like when it actually was alive and living and beautiful, etc...🥰🫂❤💯
14th Nov 2023 12:37pm
There isn’t anything that I could say that the others have said.
Wait. There is…..
Thank you for letting us in as you uncover more of you. I for one am honored to be reading this side of you, Philis.
Wait. There is…..
Thank you for letting us in as you uncover more of you. I for one am honored to be reading this side of you, Philis.
14th Nov 2023 2:44pm
Tysvm...I agree though painful I too am learning more about myself..tysvm for your continued support, visits, comments and friendship 🥰🫂❤💯
14th Nov 2023 2:50pm
The way everything turns to dust and we're left holding only half a heart, that's a feeling very familiar
14th Nov 2023 4:07pm
Sorry to hear of your pain and discomfort..but, this too shall pass--it is only temporary..I promise. Learn from it all you can..and especially about yourself, be honest and true. Tysvm for your comments and visit 🥰❤🫂💯
14th Nov 2023 6:59pm
I felt deeply the emotion though it didn’t bring me discomfort. More like one getting to know you a page at a time. Deep, but there is much more beneath.
Beautifully written.
Beautifully written.
14th Nov 2023 7:59pm
Awww..very generous and sweet of you to say...tysvm for your visit and comments 🥰❤🫂💯
