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Hank
I remember the first time I met him,
I was only nine years old,
he had dropped by with a dozen red roses,
this story I have never told.
He was taking my mom on their first date,
when I greeted him at the door,
holding a bouquet of red roses,
so beautiful I could not ignore.
His smile was big under that white cowboy hat,
a white western shirt he wore,
faded old blue jeans and cowboy boots,
holding red roses, oh yes I mentioned that before.
They married not too long after,
he had easily won all of our hearts,
in a small town bar called The Foxfire,
that's where they got their new start.
I was only nine years old,
he had dropped by with a dozen red roses,
this story I have never told.
He was taking my mom on their first date,
when I greeted him at the door,
holding a bouquet of red roses,
so beautiful I could not ignore.
His smile was big under that white cowboy hat,
a white western shirt he wore,
faded old blue jeans and cowboy boots,
holding red roses, oh yes I mentioned that before.
They married not too long after,
he had easily won all of our hearts,
in a small town bar called The Foxfire,
that's where they got their new start.
Author's Note
Lol, this kind of sounds like an old country music song.
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Re. Hank
13th Nov 2023 7:40pm
Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 00:07am
Small town hasn't quite worked out for me sadly. I've been here nearly 3 years now. :-(
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Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 00:23am
Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 00:26am
You're telling me! I'm outa time! Feeling a little impatient now, sorry. Time for something drastic, me thinks! ;-)
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Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 2:44am
Later maybe... when I'm feeling brave! What do you think I am honestly gonna do? ;-)
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Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 2:45am
Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 2:48am
I am gonna take all my clothes off & then post it on YouTube. It's a protest, you understand? ;-)
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Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 2:51am
Re: Re. Hank
14th Nov 2023 2:53am
I'll wait for the summer maybe. Give it 7 months & if I'm still feeling this way, who knows! ;-)
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